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Right on top of his head
When he slept, his lips curled up
I watched him in his bed

His little boy has a little curl
Right on top of his head
When he sleeps, his lips curl up
He watches him in his bed
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Little Boy

Contributed by DreamPoetess on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:20:28 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

My little boy had a little curl
Right on top of his head
When he slept, his lips curled up
I watched him in his bed

His little boy has a little curl
Right on top of his head
When he sleeps, his lips curl up
He watches him in his bed

Copyright © DreamPoetess ... [ 2005-10-16 01:20:28]
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Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:33:32 AM AEST
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What an adore cute write. Short, simple and sweet. Well done for a 1st submission. Keep penning.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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I LIKE IT.......IT'S WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY WAY DIFFERENT FROM ANYTHING I'VE EVER WRITTEN......I'M MORE INTO THE MORBID DARK POETRY. YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MY WORK SOON IF YOU ARE INTERESTED.
GOOD WRITE....IT'S CUTE
~~AMBER~~

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:01:26 AM AEST
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It might be simple but it carrys a big puntch.
You've painted a luvly picture here.
luv it.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:06:05 AM AEST
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I agree with all the foregoing commenters, short, simple but so cute and delightful and sweet..
Keep them coming.

Blessings

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:13:41 PM AEST
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This is cute! It's short and simple, but it's touching. The way you made it span two generations in so few words, but it was still sweet.
Keep up the writes, and just let your thoughts flow onto the page. It'll come...
Welcome to YPDC : )

Scorp.

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:14:00 PM AEST
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awww this is cute i enjoyed reading it so
delicate and heart warming, nice write and style u have.

Ben

Re: Little Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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Made me smile thanks

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