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Years ago
There was
A man that gave his life up his place in heaven for us
He walked, talked, and healed while he was here. The
Leaders got worried
As they always do
When there is something
Stronger then them
So they nailed him to
A cross. They thought
That they had gotten
Rid of the problem
But he is still here
Walking and talking
Through us who
Still remain here

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the cross

Contributed by lil_angel on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Many Many
Years ago
There was
A man that gave his life up his place in heaven for us
He walked, talked, and healed while he was here. The
Leaders got worried
As they always do
When there is something
Stronger then them
So they nailed him to
A cross. They thought
That they had gotten
Rid of the problem
But he is still here
Walking and talking
Through us who
Still remain here

Copyright © lil_angel ... [ 2003-01-20 01:40:00]
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Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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Very good write and oh so true!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:37:12 AM AEST
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Simple truth- yet still profound. Nice work .

Lone_er

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:19:21 PM AEST
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Very clever & such true meaning behind it,good one! Christina

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:40:47 PM AEST
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Amen...

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:01:11 PM AEST
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hehehe... it's a cross... until I push the comment button... then it looks weird. I like this, Tis "profound".... hehehe.... my english teacher tried to tell me that the word good is over-used, and so it now is meaningless.... what a dork...

YS

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:52:29 AM AEST
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although im atheist i think u worded this very well really gets the point out there

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by psyonara on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:15:30 PM AEST
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beautiful poem. good use of format. no one can get rid of our saviour. thank GOD! Helmut :+>

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:24:52 PM AEST
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'Leaders got worried as they always do when there is something stronger then (than) them' is a wonderfully wise phrase, lil angel! Excellent message and excellent work!
May God bless others through your poems.
Bizzy

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 04:34:05 PM AEST
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i like this and i think everyone has there own
believes

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:29:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful job! and may we ever continue in the hope he gives.
Blessings
Andrew

(PS, it doesn't look weird, even on comments!)

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Cristi on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:09:07 PM AEST
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GREAT POEM! I LOVE IT!! IT IS SOO TRUE!

Re: the cross (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:12:34 AM AEST
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Sweet, and to the point.
God Bless.

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