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Array ( [sid] => 107766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BOund to get worst [time] => 2005-10-15 01:44:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => its bound to get worst
they tell me if i keep pushing her
but what can you really do when
your best friend
seems sad, and hopless about life
you tell me it will only get worst
if i just let her waste her life on drugs
and guys who beat her
how can anything get any worst
shes living on the street
living on her little high
I cant stand back anymore
anything and everything
she does i regret for not doing it,
or atleast being there ,
so that she knows no matter
what she does
she cant keep me away
i want to tell her that i lie awake
and leave my phone on
hoping ill get that phone call
saying i need your help
but i wont shed a tear
until that day comes
but then again
they tell me its bound to get worst
and theres nothing i can do
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BOund to get worst

Contributed by coolbreeze17 on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:44:03 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

its bound to get worst
they tell me if i keep pushing her
but what can you really do when
your best friend
seems sad, and hopless about life
you tell me it will only get worst
if i just let her waste her life on drugs
and guys who beat her
how can anything get any worst
shes living on the street
living on her little high
I cant stand back anymore
anything and everything
she does i regret for not doing it,
or atleast being there ,
so that she knows no matter
what she does
she cant keep me away
i want to tell her that i lie awake
and leave my phone on
hoping ill get that phone call
saying i need your help
but i wont shed a tear
until that day comes
but then again
they tell me its bound to get worst
and theres nothing i can do

Copyright © coolbreeze17 ... [ 2005-10-15 01:44:03]
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Re: BOund to get worst (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:40:53 AM AEST
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This hits home personally for me. A cousin lost custody of bothe her children because of drugs. Maybe things will go better for your friend if she realizes what she is doing. You are a good friend to syick in there with her.

Re: BOund to get worst (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:27:36 PM AEST
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If you push her to much, she may go to far, just be there, always be open for someone she needs to call, make it clear, that you'll help her, and that what shes doing is wrong, that it can be fixed, and you want to be there. Great write.

-Cassy

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