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that heralds the golden sun
on a misty, cold winter's dawn

She is the tranquility
of luminous moon's reflection
on the wet sands of a silver beach

O! she is the melody
of a lullaby sang to hush
the murmurings of a blue soul

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My Muse

Contributed by remote on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:47:21 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

My muse, she is a chime
that heralds the golden sun
on a misty, cold winter's dawn

She is the tranquility
of luminous moon's reflection
on the wet sands of a silver beach

O! she is the melody
of a lullaby sang to hush
the murmurings of a blue soul

The list is here:
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&p=649386#649386

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Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:01:55 AM AEST
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VERY NICE.

GOOD WRITE.

STRANGELY BRILIANT ALTHOUGH VERY SHORT.

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:34:19 AM AEST
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this is very nice got into the jazz of it, silver
beach deffinately a place i wanna get lost
in . . .

Ben

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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thank you:> I will have to try those words out, and if I spot something I will place it in forum, thank you for this, your poem is very beautiful with the ten:>

Re: My Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 11:11:49 AM AEST
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using the ten most beautiful english words does not always garuantee an equally beautiful poem. U managed to create a very nice poem using these words, and I must say that this has to be one of the most emotionally beautiful poems I've read in a while.
One critique though: the poem ends a bit abruptly, and it almost seems unfinished. An extra stanza would have rounded it up nicely.

Much love
Ash~

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