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He says he''ll treat her like this for many more years.
His actions they prove what she''s feared all along.
She knows with every line he''ll see no wrong.
He said he''d never hurt her, but that was a lie.
She knows what he''s done and it makes her want to die.
She should make it end, and not think twice.
But she knows inside that won''t suffice. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 22 [informant] => radstraightedge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Just Won't Suffice

Contributed by radstraightedge on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:52:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He sees the tears, but he doesn''t seem to care.
He says he''ll treat her like this for many more years.
His actions they prove what she''s feared all along.
She knows with every line he''ll see no wrong.
He said he''d never hurt her, but that was a lie.
She knows what he''s done and it makes her want to die.
She should make it end, and not think twice.
But she knows inside that won''t suffice.

Copyright © radstraightedge ... [ 2005-10-10 22:52:24]
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Re: Just Won't Suffice (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:01:10 PM AEST
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Liked your style in poetry. I understand it and can relate to it very very much. have no answers because I stayed as well. got better but that happens one in 50. Love your self, get stronger only time when things will change. put up with it and you lose yourself more. gain control by getting stronger and don't hurt yourself. talk to me sometimes. good write. .

Re: Just Won't Suffice (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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small but overflowing with emotion..this was an amazing write.

Re: Just Won't Suffice (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:09:13 AM AEST
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Nice Wording-
Sometimes words spoken are broken-
No one likes the end results but there is always an alternative solution-
Choose another road totravel and put the past behind you...
Joe

Re: Just Won't Suffice (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 06:36:39 AM AEST
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good write i liked it alot

Re: Just Won't Suffice (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:40:15 AM AEST
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good poem, they say women/girls are born martyrs especially when it comes to love

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