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She sits lonely
At the bar
He buys her a drink
Then guides her out to his car

He turns down a dark ally
Begins to kiss her cheek
She tries to resist
But she's too frightened to speak

His hands begin to roam
She quivers with fear
He whispers softly "Don't bother to scream..
There's no one near."

He unbuttons her pants
She tries to put up a fight
Screaming and yelling
But her cries vanish into the night

A blow to the gut
Another to the head
She fears for her life
Fears that she might end up dead

Again and again...
She pleads for her life
He screams in her ear
"SHUT UP OR I'LL GET MY KNIFE"

She's too weak now to even struggle
But still she tries
He's just too strong
Using his hand to muffle her cries

Trying not to provoke him,
She lies there lifelessly
As he continues forcing himself upon her
Violating her privacy

Her body now lies cold
on the empty, dark street
Bloody and bruised
From her head to her feet

The ally, closed off
With bright yellow tape
Last night was the night
She was beaten and raped
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Violated

Contributed by xPixiexDustx on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 04:59:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



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She sits lonely
At the bar
He buys her a drink
Then guides her out to his car

He turns down a dark ally
Begins to kiss her cheek
She tries to resist
But she's too frightened to speak

His hands begin to roam
She quivers with fear
He whispers softly "Don't bother to scream..
There's no one near."

He unbuttons her pants
She tries to put up a fight
Screaming and yelling
But her cries vanish into the night

A blow to the gut
Another to the head
She fears for her life
Fears that she might end up dead

Again and again...
She pleads for her life
He screams in her ear
"SHUT UP OR I'LL GET MY KNIFE"

She's too weak now to even struggle
But still she tries
He's just too strong
Using his hand to muffle her cries

Trying not to provoke him,
She lies there lifelessly
As he continues forcing himself upon her
Violating her privacy

Her body now lies cold
on the empty, dark street
Bloody and bruised
From her head to her feet

The ally, closed off
With bright yellow tape
Last night was the night
She was beaten and raped




Copyright © xPixiexDustx ... [ 2005-10-08 16:59:57]
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Re: Violated (User Rating: 1 )
by AnaBanana on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:03:07 PM AEST
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wow this should never have to happen to any girl ever


Re: Violated (User Rating: 1 )
by zalzool on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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amazing write
amazing work
very sad to write
as commented before that should never happen
peace


Re: Violated (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:43:07 AM AEST
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so sad...


Re: Violated (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:02:13 AM AEST
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A bad scene for sure. Nice quatrain with end words of lines two and four rhyming.


Re: Violated (User Rating: 1 )
by judasman on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST
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disturbing





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