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Array ( [sid] => 107169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Once Upon a Time.............. [time] => 2005-10-05 22:41:21 [hometext] => just beautiful stories, that are so real. [bodytext] => An enchanted world to some, can be simple as can be
We DONT need the words, Of once Upon a Time to be in a happy world
We can see that we all have our own preceptions, of happy
Take for instance, A knight, in shining armor, and Swords that he carries
A fair maiden , with the hair of gold
She is smitten with thee, knight you see
Yet, he could be swordless, and she still would want all
A horse of midnight the knight, does ride
All galiant, in silver and standing as straight as he could
Sees the fair maiden, and knows there is distress
Yet the fair maiden will not let on to disgress
She takes what she feels, and lets all bad pass
For the Knight has given more, and has been heard to this
So dont let the ONCE UPON a TIME for thee
Its doesnt have to be those words, to be fairy tale , just know thee is real.! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 14 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Once Upon a Time..............

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:41:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



An enchanted world to some, can be simple as can be
We DONT need the words, Of once Upon a Time to be in a happy world
We can see that we all have our own preceptions, of happy
Take for instance, A knight, in shining armor, and Swords that he carries
A fair maiden , with the hair of gold
She is smitten with thee, knight you see
Yet, he could be swordless, and she still would want all
A horse of midnight the knight, does ride
All galiant, in silver and standing as straight as he could
Sees the fair maiden, and knows there is distress
Yet the fair maiden will not let on to disgress
She takes what she feels, and lets all bad pass
For the Knight has given more, and has been heard to this
So dont let the ONCE UPON a TIME for thee
Its doesnt have to be those words, to be fairy tale , just know thee is real.!




Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-10-05 22:41:21]
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Re: Once Upon a Time.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:43:44 PM AEST
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This was a good write... i liked it a lot
GODBLESS
BEBE


Re: Once Upon a Time.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 03:01:44 AM AEST
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A very impressive masterpeice, thine hath created here.
huggs,
big smiles,
emy


Re: Once Upon a Time.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 01:11:04 PM AEST
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Nice brew...very good. Yes, a 'fairytale' ending can take on many forms. True love is there for those who seek it...Well said! Keep it up.



Scorp.


Re: Once Upon a Time.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST
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Thanks for the reminder. I will take your advice. Your words in this poem are very encouraging.


Re: Once Upon a Time.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:06:52 AM AEST
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Brew, I so enjoy your excellent writing.
Thanks.

Jeff




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