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broken bonds
holding me down
eating me whole
I fall to the darkest space

the tears don't stop from falling
nothing inside of me to take just
a dark body full of emptiness

darkness consumes me
as i fight for my life
down i go back to my abysmal place
where all i have is time to waste

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again i go Down

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Shattered soul
broken bonds
holding me down
eating me whole
I fall to the darkest space

the tears don't stop from falling
nothing inside of me to take just
a dark body full of emptiness

darkness consumes me
as i fight for my life
down i go back to my abysmal place
where all i have is time to waste

JENNI

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Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:31:09 AM AEST
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Wow, Jennittude! ! ! ! That must have been a very sad day indeed. You made me feel the emotion with every word. Awesome.

Thanks for sharing and take care,

Tim
:-)

Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:22:50 PM AEST
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I agree with Tim-Tam up above, definitely.
Awesome, it is.
The first stanza really drew me in.

Also, "where all I have is time to waste"...
Well, found that pretty powerful.

Great job, keep writing!

~KayT
(who hopes that things are definitely looking up now)

Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:08:07 PM AEST
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It's the first time I read your work Jenni and I have to admit I like what I've read. Your poem is packed with sad emotions.
darkness consumes me
as i fight for my life
down i go back to my abysmal place
where all i have is time to waste
I can so much relate to these words written. Chin up and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
*hugs*
sue

Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:48:12 PM AEST
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i liked this poem

Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:39:56 PM AEST
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Amazing how you capturd the emotion of one being depressed and of course we hope your not and you are just writting of it.
A very good post.

Sinned

Re: again i go Down (User Rating: 1 )
by MysticFairy on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:35:04 AM AEST
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This is VERY sad. Well written. It reminds me of how I feel sometimes. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the comment on my song.

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