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[title] => nothing left
[time] => 2005-10-05 18:40:22
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[bodytext] => There's no where to run, there's no place to hide. All the good has gone and been swept aside. To be taken away and never seen again, for me to be happy now would be nothing short of pretend. The smile they see isn't quite what they think. But I want poeple to know I'm not being fake. Things seem to happen for no reason at all. And when they do my world crumbles and falls. I know things could be worse and I shouldn't complain. But the lack of certain feelings is driving me insane. I try to hide the thoughts from others, knowing if they knew I might soon be discovered. To be found a fake, someone only acting content. But in the world today how much happiness is meant? If you let them think you're happy inside maybe they'll leave you to yourself and soon let you die. To be destined for this fate makes me cringe with fear. And the thought of nothing changing makes me soon find a tear. Pretending never comes harder than at a time like this. But maybe things will get better when I find out what I miss.
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nothing left
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There's no where to run, there's no place to hide. All the good has gone and been swept aside. To be taken away and never seen again, for me to be happy now would be nothing short of pretend. The smile they see isn't quite what they think. But I want poeple to know I'm not being fake. Things seem to happen for no reason at all. And when they do my world crumbles and falls. I know things could be worse and I shouldn't complain. But the lack of certain feelings is driving me insane. I try to hide the thoughts from others, knowing if they knew I might soon be discovered. To be found a fake, someone only acting content. But in the world today how much happiness is meant? If you let them think you're happy inside maybe they'll leave you to yourself and soon let you die. To be destined for this fate makes me cringe with fear. And the thought of nothing changing makes me soon find a tear. Pretending never comes harder than at a time like this. But maybe things will get better when I find out what I miss.
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Re: nothing left
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:58:50 PM AEST
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cool write interesting write
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Re: nothing left
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by seci on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:37:24 PM AEST
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maybe there is something lefted, but you not for sure what way may be right
maybe you need a hand to guide you to the light
i truly understand what you say
damn i remember like it was yesterday ,because i remember feeling this same way
you still have this poem
but realize there is more to life, just pray and never to your body do any harm
you say that there is nothing left
um think
i love this poem, it is enough to make money off of in put in in the bank. take care and remember to stay positive. |
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Re: nothing left
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:48:04 PM AEST
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wow this is very powerful and you can feel the emotion in it.. i can relate to this writing very much great job
JENNI |
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Re: nothing left
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by mccscratch on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:10:36 PM AEST
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| well done...well said |
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Re: nothing left
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by Zanobia on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:03:42 PM AEST
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| man i am crying. i really liked it. it is really good. i wish i cold write adn ryme like that |
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Re: nothing left
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:52:13 PM AEST
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| this was really good i liked it alot....and i could totally relate to this poem...keep it up!!! |
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