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We all go through so much lonely pain
WE look and find which the heart is true
Yet it cant be there unless both want it too
Most look and beleive
Then another is wondered......
It was given and made it was known for good
Then something breaks, and all misunderstood
If you love, then stop, and see what is ...........
If it isnt what the heart says.............give up and move on

We cant pretend, and get what is needed...........Some pretend, and try to move on
Thats why the ones who do.............LOSE [comments] => 9 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

HELPLESS HEARTS

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

So much to lose, yet so much to gain
We all go through so much lonely pain
WE look and find which the heart is true
Yet it cant be there unless both want it too
Most look and beleive
Then another is wondered......
It was given and made it was known for good
Then something breaks, and all misunderstood
If you love, then stop, and see what is ...........
If it isnt what the heart says.............give up and move on

We cant pretend, and get what is needed...........Some pretend, and try to move on
Thats why the ones who do.............LOSE

Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-09-29 21:52:25]
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Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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Gotta love reading a poem at just the right time...lol So very true! Like your thoughts in this one brew. Good job.

Scorp.

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:14:22 PM AEST
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I have to say WE ALL SOUL MATE SISTERS.......WE HAVE DONE THIS TWICE>! KARMA HUN...........You have read and then psoted and I have done the same........

Brew~

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:09:36 PM AEST
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Tedious rhymes. Great job.

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:48:19 AM AEST
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Yes Dayna:

That loss of love and security at its best, we all need someone to love and take care of our hearts.

What is it that we see in ourselves that need to be improved so that others around us will improve as well. We are the ones who help to change that up, by changing ourselves, our outside world is looking in.

Beautiful write, lots of wisdom shines. Thank you,

Raquel Leah :D

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:14:36 AM AEST
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Great Write

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:06:13 AM AEST
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a good write for us to read thanks brew
coni

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:51:59 PM AEST
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This is a good write. I can not say i truly know how you feel. I have close friends and we have our quirks but I have never had more than that. (...)

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:55:01 AM AEST
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this is so sad but so true u know what? i wish u love, realy i do, it's out there somewhere, hope it finds u, a lovely peice of poetry.

Ben

Re: HELPLESS HEARTS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:02:40 AM AEST
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Very thoguht provoking write.
Huggs,
emy

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