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[aid] => Mick
[title] => My Wings
[time] => 2003-01-18 08:00:00
[hometext] => I wrote this poem to one day be read at my funeral! After my mom passed I wrote one for her & read it at her funeral so it got me thinking that WHO would write one for me! So this is what I got!
[bodytext] => I know your heart must be aching,
for I know this kind of pain,
My life that God is taking,
Lives in Heaven to remain,
Eached in my soul will be your tears,
as I take this journey to the Other Side,
I will watch you close,till you are here,
Being your angel guide,
You helped me to receive my wings,
By the love you gave me,
Theres much beauty,that my new life brings,
I just wish you could see,
Think how lucky I am to see this place,
More beautiful than in your mind,
I know your sad not seeing my face,
but you'll find peace in time,
Remember the love I gave you,
And your heart will soon be able to see,
the splender of my journey through,
So please don't cry for me,
There will be a time we will meet again,
and I'll be waiting near,
I will be greeting you in the end,
So please wipe away that tear,
Please smile when you think of me,
for I will be your angel guide,
my wings you will never see,
but they are always by your side,
I will leave you feathers to find,
that my angel wings can spare,
To ease your sorrow from your mind,
Letting you know I was there!
©2003
By Christina Lowman
[comments] => 12
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[topic] => 52
[informant] => LOWMAN613
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => goodbyepoetry
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My Wings
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I know your heart must be aching,
for I know this kind of pain,
My life that God is taking,
Lives in Heaven to remain,
Eached in my soul will be your tears,
as I take this journey to the Other Side,
I will watch you close,till you are here,
Being your angel guide,
You helped me to receive my wings,
By the love you gave me,
Theres much beauty,that my new life brings,
I just wish you could see,
Think how lucky I am to see this place,
More beautiful than in your mind,
I know your sad not seeing my face,
but you'll find peace in time,
Remember the love I gave you,
And your heart will soon be able to see,
the splender of my journey through,
So please don't cry for me,
There will be a time we will meet again,
and I'll be waiting near,
I will be greeting you in the end,
So please wipe away that tear,
Please smile when you think of me,
for I will be your angel guide,
my wings you will never see,
but they are always by your side,
I will leave you feathers to find,
that my angel wings can spare,
To ease your sorrow from your mind,
Letting you know I was there!
©2003
By Christina Lowman
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-18 08:00:00]
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Re: My Wings
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:18:19 AM AEST
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This poem is absolutely beautiful maam. A tremendous gift to those who will be, or are, grief sticken. It touches all of us. Thank you.
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Re: My Wings
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:15:53 AM AEST
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| Oh Christina, you make my heart weep for you already, this is so beautifully done, something your kids will cherish for many years, thanks for sharing your heart again |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 12:05:23 PM AEST
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| It's perfect Christina! You have a beautiful heart....:o) Larry |
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:44:05 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written Christina ... |
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Re: My Wings
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 07:04:56 PM AEST
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abusolutely wonderful ..my sentiments exactly you have a rare talent my friend.
Shari |
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 07:05:01 PM AEST
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abusolutely wonderful ..my sentiments exactly you have a rare talent my friend.
Shari |
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Re: My Wings
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by spooky on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 08:14:07 PM AEST
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| beautifully written,,excellent piece of work,,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: My Wings
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by SusieQ on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:40:50 PM AEST
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| My Wings, LOWMAN613, is a very reassuring and comforting letter for your loved ones. I like the sweet idea of picking up a feather and thinking of my mother or father being near. SusieQ |
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Re: My Wings
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 02:56:48 AM AEST
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| Lovely... good idea Christina:) |
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Re: My Wings
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 03:37:51 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write Christina,
No doubt it will bring much peace to those loved ones left behind.
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Re: My Wings
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by OreO on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 12:59:44 PM AEST
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Why do you do this to me ......geez i've read this poem 3 times...i cant stop crying.....you always write things that make me cry ...your beautiful poetry touches me so deep Christina...i can't even begin to tell you how much of an inspiration you have been for me...not only in your poetry but in my own life with things i've had to face and deal with that nobody even knows. It's hard because sometimes it's like you will write about somthing and it talks to me as almost giving me an answer because it makes me think, it makes me think hard about what i have, the people in my life, how they are here with me right now...and how very easy it would be to lose them or myself .....never stop writing christina....your poetry touches so many people in life...me being one of them....i love this beautiful piece...
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Re: My Wings
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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| Very good work....interesting to think about death from another point of view. sure to touch the heart of anyone who has the privelage to read your words. |
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