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Array ( [sid] => 10625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Other Side part 2 [time] => 2003-01-18 01:00:00 [hometext] => The second part to my other poem,on the book that I'm reading "Conversations with the Other Side" By Sylvia Browne
This book has been such an up lift to me! [bodytext] => My Spirit Guide tells me about life on the" Other Side",
Telling me we can be how we choose,
From blonde,to brunette,to brown or blue eyed,
and that we don't have to win or loose,
We don't need food or water to survive,
theres no need to really eat,
Theres no existance of jelousy or pride,
everyones happy and fully complete,
The beauty here is beyond compare,
and in words hard to explain,
everything wonderful that a person can share,
Is their only spirital gain,
Just imagine everything thats beautiful only 100 times more,
All of Gods creation is doubled,
more for you to do and explore,
relieving all your worries and troubles,
I asked her will my family know me,
yes,but you may have a different face,
on the Other Side we are all the age 30,
and blessed with eternity by their grace,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
God is all around,although we never see,
his overpowering spirit we feel,
We are all bathed in his energy,
which makes him seem so real,
Jesus does exist and walks around us everyday,
blessing entities wherever he goes,
cherishing his knowledge in all he can say,
enlightened by his spirital glows,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
With all this beauty I still wonder why,
what happens if we decide our own end?
If you shall choose to want to die,
your spirit goes back to start over again,
they are not able to live on the Other Side,
untill they finish their spirital plan,
Theres no easy way out,to try to hide,
they have to face their troubles again,
As with this knowledge she gave to me,
I was smiling just to know,
there is a place thats as beautiful as can be,
When it will be my time to go!
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The Other Side part 2

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



My Spirit Guide tells me about life on the" Other Side",
Telling me we can be how we choose,
From blonde,to brunette,to brown or blue eyed,
and that we don't have to win or loose,
We don't need food or water to survive,
theres no need to really eat,
Theres no existance of jelousy or pride,
everyones happy and fully complete,
The beauty here is beyond compare,
and in words hard to explain,
everything wonderful that a person can share,
Is their only spirital gain,
Just imagine everything thats beautiful only 100 times more,
All of Gods creation is doubled,
more for you to do and explore,
relieving all your worries and troubles,
I asked her will my family know me,
yes,but you may have a different face,
on the Other Side we are all the age 30,
and blessed with eternity by their grace,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
God is all around,although we never see,
his overpowering spirit we feel,
We are all bathed in his energy,
which makes him seem so real,
Jesus does exist and walks around us everyday,
blessing entities wherever he goes,
cherishing his knowledge in all he can say,
enlightened by his spirital glows,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
With all this beauty I still wonder why,
what happens if we decide our own end?
If you shall choose to want to die,
your spirit goes back to start over again,
they are not able to live on the Other Side,
untill they finish their spirital plan,
Theres no easy way out,to try to hide,
they have to face their troubles again,
As with this knowledge she gave to me,
I was smiling just to know,
there is a place thats as beautiful as can be,
When it will be my time to go!




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Re: The Other Side part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:36:11 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems from your pen.
dear Christina..for all questions there is an answer. But if you know the secret of the self..or if your mind could go into the cave of your heart..where the 'I' ness originates..there
you can find the Lord..Because he is hidden in our soul as pure knowledge, you are always feeling his nearness...that is the fact.
your soul, your spirit is pure, beautiful..I appreciate You..Venkat


Re: The Other Side part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:26:55 AM AEST
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I completely agree with venkat....your soul and spirit is so pure christina this is awesome....i love this write it's my favorite of yours....your inspiration comes from so many different things from your kids, your husband, your mom, your dad, even your family....i enjoy reading your poetry girl and i am proud to say you are my friend .....thank you for just being you ...and you keep on writing ....this one is a masterpiece...love this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: The Other Side part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:19:20 AM AEST
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Thanks Oreo & Venkat I really worked hard on both writes I was really inspired by the book I read on this subject! It was so enlighting! Christina


Re: The Other Side part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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They said it all ....breathtaking, :o) Larry


Re: The Other Side part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 07:02:33 PM AEST
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AWESOME...INSPIRING..LOVED IT

shari




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