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Array ( [sid] => 106197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Empty Dream [time] => 2005-09-22 00:17:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I had a dream he called again-
what a dream that was.
I had a dream he missed my touch and
needed me near him so very much.
He missed my smile and my face and couldn’t resist the salty taste.
What a dream that was
sending shivers down my spine.
He swept my curls from my face
and pulled it from behind.
He screamed my name in that particular way, and closed his eyes, so deep and gray.
Next thing I knew, I awoke
It was the next day.
Bitter pain swelled in my chest
Tears filled the almond crest.
Time to face a new day yet one more time
How will I do this, haunting dreams possess my mind?
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Empty Dream

Contributed by tdp on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:17:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I had a dream he called again-
what a dream that was.
I had a dream he missed my touch and
needed me near him so very much.
He missed my smile and my face and couldn’t resist the salty taste.
What a dream that was
sending shivers down my spine.
He swept my curls from my face
and pulled it from behind.
He screamed my name in that particular way, and closed his eyes, so deep and gray.
Next thing I knew, I awoke
It was the next day.
Bitter pain swelled in my chest
Tears filled the almond crest.
Time to face a new day yet one more time
How will I do this, haunting dreams possess my mind?

Copyright Â© tdp ... [ 2005-09-22 00:17:47]
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Re: Empty Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:57:18 PM AEST
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ahhh, ok love this tittle it has thruth and deep sincerity in it yeh aren't they all empty just like promises, this poem touched me i could hear the despair in the words as one hears the turmoil in the frustration of a confused child, i beleive u have a poem of dignity here and a most prevalent little work of poetic art,
a sad but lovely watercolor, very well done . .

Ben

Re: Empty Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:32:03 PM AEST
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I really like this. I've had dreams like that. Wonderful work.

Re: Empty Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:32:34 AM AEST
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Wow, definitely another incredible write with the wonderful imagery and powerful emotion. Isn't it horrible when we wake from dreams of these kind...only to find it wasn't real?

Hope it all comes true for you someday.

Thank you for sharing a brilliant write.

Take care

Tim
:)

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