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Array ( [sid] => 10582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Living On Borrowed Breath [time] => 2003-01-17 11:00:00 [hometext] => i think only death will push us to become our best selves so this is a simple poem i write to myself to inspire and enlighten when life refuses to go my way. [bodytext] => Living On Borrowed Breath


I live today
On borrowed breath
For I once stray
from fated death.

While sucking my last breath
I begged God for a chance
I heard myself cry, hoping
He would save the last dance.

Window of my soul closed
And sad songs played
Black birds flew to me
As if knowing I was dead.

I saw the light of a train
That traveled with force so bold
And the sudden crimson rain
Is the ode from this broken soul

I thought I could cry
And listened to people weep
But now I felt pierced
On the chest, nine inch deep.

Nothingness was there
Light and blackness
everywhere.

I asked God for a chance
To see the final dance
To replay the rain
To live again.

God I just want to borrow some time
Some breath
Not now, Death!

Sitting afar and aloof
He looked and vanished
With a tear in His eye
He said ‘it is finished’

Heaven door closes, noises rise
I know where I am
Someone touches me and sighs
I am, I am damned.

The golden sun kisses softly on my cheek
I open my tired eyes and see
Bright cards and smiling people around me.

I winked at God this morning
and put all my sorrows to death
I live every second to my finest
for I am living on borrowed breath.
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Living On Borrowed Breath

Contributed by yesterdayboy on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Living On Borrowed Breath


I live today
On borrowed breath
For I once stray
from fated death.

While sucking my last breath
I begged God for a chance
I heard myself cry, hoping
He would save the last dance.

Window of my soul closed
And sad songs played
Black birds flew to me
As if knowing I was dead.

I saw the light of a train
That traveled with force so bold
And the sudden crimson rain
Is the ode from this broken soul

I thought I could cry
And listened to people weep
But now I felt pierced
On the chest, nine inch deep.

Nothingness was there
Light and blackness
everywhere.

I asked God for a chance
To see the final dance
To replay the rain
To live again.

God I just want to borrow some time
Some breath
Not now, Death!

Sitting afar and aloof
He looked and vanished
With a tear in His eye
He said ‘it is finished’

Heaven door closes, noises rise
I know where I am
Someone touches me and sighs
I am, I am damned.

The golden sun kisses softly on my cheek
I open my tired eyes and see
Bright cards and smiling people around me.

I winked at God this morning
and put all my sorrows to death
I live every second to my finest
for I am living on borrowed breath.




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Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 12:10:33 PM AEST
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Excellent Write.
(me too.)


Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:39:04 PM AEST
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A great write...your other piece very good as well..
ta
rosie


Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:28:16 PM AEST
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I absolutely love the ending!!!! wonderful poem


mckayla


Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:51:53 PM AEST
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Oooo how beautiful this is...behold that i dont faint.....and how soothing to read this...living on borrowed breath...starts out dark and then it's full of inspiration...how lovely.....love this one....thanks for sharing it....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 01:42:46 AM AEST
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Interesting title with an interesting poem. Good job! Yeah...


Re: Living On Borrowed Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 04:14:46 PM AEST
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Yesterdayboy, this is the Bizzy, formerly SusiQ,
that just commented on your For Now. This poem is profound and magnificent. You must have some deeply moving experiences to inspire you! Great- Grandma Bizzy




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