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Array ( [sid] => 105819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories [time] => 2005-09-16 13:28:35 [hometext] => comments welcome [bodytext] => Memories is all I have left of you
The happy times and the sad
Photos of you and me
Waiting to be framed
Best of friends
For 5 and a half years
Flushed down the loo
Cause of one lil fight
I have tried to make this work
Yet you still push it back in my face
All I ask is to be able to talk
Without feeling the uncomfortable
But you don’t even want that
Whilst we were shouting in the form room
You sounded like you were about to cry
‘cause I know I was
you seemed upset about what happened
but you can’t bare to look at me let alone talk to me
I gave you a picture of us
When we were younger
All you did was tear it up and throw it in my face
We were close friend
Who cared about each other
Yet you can live yourself knowing
That you have put me through this pain and misery
Every day and night
The sight of you laughing moving on
We could still be having fun like we used to
If you would let this little thing
go

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 16 [informant] => JenJen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Memories

Contributed by JenJen on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Memories is all I have left of you
The happy times and the sad
Photos of you and me
Waiting to be framed
Best of friends
For 5 and a half years
Flushed down the loo
Cause of one lil fight
I have tried to make this work
Yet you still push it back in my face
All I ask is to be able to talk
Without feeling the uncomfortable
But you don’t even want that
Whilst we were shouting in the form room
You sounded like you were about to cry
‘cause I know I was
you seemed upset about what happened
but you can’t bare to look at me let alone talk to me
I gave you a picture of us
When we were younger
All you did was tear it up and throw it in my face
We were close friend
Who cared about each other
Yet you can live yourself knowing
That you have put me through this pain and misery
Every day and night
The sight of you laughing moving on
We could still be having fun like we used to
If you would let this little thing
go

Copyright Â© JenJen ... [ 2005-09-16 13:28:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:31:40 PM AEST
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aww, thats really sad jens!! but brilliantly written! well done
megs
xXx

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:06:50 PM AEST
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I've been through this. You've done all you can. The ball's in your friend's court.
This is a great but sad write. Nice work. I really hope you two work it out. :-)

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:16:32 PM AEST
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its always sad when long time friends break up...hope everything works out!!..great write

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:53:50 PM AEST
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awww this made me cry cuz i could feel all the emotion u put into this. i reeeeallly love the beginning! i too have been through this . . .its painful. . . *hugs*
great poem!

Re: Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:28:01 PM AEST
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Very nice write....God Bless!

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