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Array ( [sid] => 105567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Backstaber [time] => 2005-09-12 19:52:19 [hometext] => Well i am not sure what was going through my head when i wrote this no one hurt me its just one of those poems i guess! i don't like it that much but id like to know what you think so comment it! [bodytext] => it's back the wind
well you don't say
im back in the deep end
did your mother say to pray

walking with this guilt braking my back
can't see with theese attacks

you forgot to say please
you forgot you hurt me
your such a backstaber

your words are sinking in
i've wasted this life
will another one begain

in the middle of a gun fight
what did you mean
no ones been shot not tonight
your acting like a drama queen

you forgot to say please
you forgot you hurt me
your such a backstaber

you want me to speak
well im screaming at you
can't find what you lack
your eyes were gleaming
and I found that knife of yours in my back [comments] => 1 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 6 [informant] => russ-dawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Backstaber

Contributed by russ-dawg on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



it's back the wind
well you don't say
im back in the deep end
did your mother say to pray

walking with this guilt braking my back
can't see with theese attacks

you forgot to say please
you forgot you hurt me
your such a backstaber

your words are sinking in
i've wasted this life
will another one begain

in the middle of a gun fight
what did you mean
no ones been shot not tonight
your acting like a drama queen

you forgot to say please
you forgot you hurt me
your such a backstaber

you want me to speak
well im screaming at you
can't find what you lack
your eyes were gleaming
and I found that knife of yours in my back




Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-09-12 19:52:19]
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Re: Backstaber (User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:53:27 PM AEST
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wow... i like the poem... and i mean i likes... i feel that the poems that just "come out of no where"... are the best... i say this because of a quote that a poet once said... "poetry is the spontaneous combination of powerful words..." and this poem is obviously true poetry... congrads on the write....

jeremy




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