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Array ( [sid] => 105449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => June 18th [time] => 2005-09-10 23:09:53 [hometext] => This is about Harlan my friend that i wrote about before [bodytext] => I was so happy that day I was turning 17 then my phone rang it was your sister she saaid yo got in a accedent I didn't belive her..... you lost your leg and you where bleeding from the brain.

tell me why you where too cool for a helmet? Your brain was being suffcated you where dying
I pryed for you to contue to breah then i went and saw you in the hosapital it was the worst thing ever
i walked into your room alone so i could deal with what i was about to see and i thought i had walked
into the wrong room you looked like a little boy not the 23 year old man that you are you looked so
helpless i held your hand and i talked to you trying to crack jokes that was really hard i started to cry
even though you where in a coma you could hear my sobs you started to winkle up your face i squeezed
your hand and i thought that nothing would get better.
but your a man of steel your your own superman your my hero your better already. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 39 [informant] => ilhsa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
June 18th

Contributed by ilhsa on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:09:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



I was so happy that day I was turning 17 then my phone rang it was your sister she saaid yo got in a accedent I didn't belive her..... you lost your leg and you where bleeding from the brain.

tell me why you where too cool for a helmet? Your brain was being suffcated you where dying
I pryed for you to contue to breah then i went and saw you in the hosapital it was the worst thing ever
i walked into your room alone so i could deal with what i was about to see and i thought i had walked
into the wrong room you looked like a little boy not the 23 year old man that you are you looked so
helpless i held your hand and i talked to you trying to crack jokes that was really hard i started to cry
even though you where in a coma you could hear my sobs you started to winkle up your face i squeezed
your hand and i thought that nothing would get better.
but your a man of steel your your own superman your my hero your better already.




Copyright © ilhsa ... [ 2005-09-10 23:09:53]
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Re: June 18th (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:16:55 AM AEST
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Im very sorry. Some or most of these questions may never be answered,
very good write
GODBLESS you
Always
BEBE


Re: June 18th (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST
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great write... sad and full of hope at the same time




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