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Array ( [sid] => 105448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Safety Pinned Heart [time] => 2005-09-10 22:55:41 [hometext] => ...and then you find that one person that gives you a little bit of hope before they slip away... [bodytext] => Will you be the safety pin
that holds my heart together?
Will you look into my eyes even though
I know they've burned forever?

And when our wings burn off,
will you catch me before the sky does?
See, it feels a lot like drowning
But I think that I'm in love

And will your safety pin hold up,
even after whatever we go through?
Well I'd be happy if you like me half as much
as I'm in love with you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 24 [informant] => TeenageDirtbag [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Safety Pinned Heart

Contributed by TeenageDirtbag on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Will you be the safety pin
that holds my heart together?
Will you look into my eyes even though
I know they've burned forever?

And when our wings burn off,
will you catch me before the sky does?
See, it feels a lot like drowning
But I think that I'm in love

And will your safety pin hold up,
even after whatever we go through?
Well I'd be happy if you like me half as much
as I'm in love with you.

Copyright © TeenageDirtbag ... [ 2005-09-10 22:55:41]
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Re: Safety Pinned Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:18:44 AM AEST
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See, it feels a lot like drowning
But I think that I'm in love , i guess that kinda sums up a lil about what love is.... I wouldnt know
But GREAT WRITE
GODBLES
BEBE

Re: Safety Pinned Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 01:41:43 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written poem! It's so sincere.
Being in love is the most amazing feeling in the world, so take advantage of it. :-)
Excellent work.

Re: Safety Pinned Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:39:45 AM AEST
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amazing thoughts strung together by words so simple...just wonderful

Umang

Re: Safety Pinned Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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Very nice concept indeed. I like this, and the fact that you're not totally sure, and asking questions, yet still brave enough to take that 'fall.'
Nice! Good ending.

Scorp.

Re: Safety Pinned Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:33:32 AM AEST
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3 years ago tuesday i found my soul mate when i was lost, he was a meer bandgage that god ripped away too soon now the wounds may never heal ... great write your poem was a reminder of him
thank you

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