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Array ( [sid] => 105438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Heart of a Broken Man [time] => 2005-09-10 20:09:25 [hometext] => Having a broken heart...hard isn't it? Thought everything was going perfect...then you're heart is ripped into pieces and spat on by the person you thought you loved...hard isn't? [bodytext] => Falling down an endless well,
‘Tis once the place
I used to dwell.
The writings on the wall,
I cannot comprehend
them at all.

Looking into nature’s soul,
I found a love
I once stole.
Nothing this broken man could say
Would alter your mind
and make you think in a new way.

My heart’s an endless whirlpool of blood,
Pumping the thick and distasteful mud,
Through my empty veins as I sing,
“I was murdered by a girl who once stole that empty thing.”

Throw my heart on the stove,
Let is boil and
throw it out into the empty cove.
Brush against my disposition,
Smile and apologize
and ask for some recognition.

The sweet smell of you,
You’re fragrant perfume
hypnotizes me to think you’re true.
Nothing this broken man could say
Would alter your mind
and make you think in a new way.

My heart’s an endless whirlpool of blood,
Pumping the thick and distasteful mud,
Through my empty veins as I sing,
“I was murdered by a girl who once stole that empty thing.”
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Broken Heart of a Broken Man

Contributed by Bones on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Falling down an endless well,
‘Tis once the place
I used to dwell.
The writings on the wall,
I cannot comprehend
them at all.

Looking into nature’s soul,
I found a love
I once stole.
Nothing this broken man could say
Would alter your mind
and make you think in a new way.

My heart’s an endless whirlpool of blood,
Pumping the thick and distasteful mud,
Through my empty veins as I sing,
“I was murdered by a girl who once stole that empty thing.”

Throw my heart on the stove,
Let is boil and
throw it out into the empty cove.
Brush against my disposition,
Smile and apologize
and ask for some recognition.

The sweet smell of you,
You’re fragrant perfume
hypnotizes me to think you’re true.
Nothing this broken man could say
Would alter your mind
and make you think in a new way.

My heart’s an endless whirlpool of blood,
Pumping the thick and distasteful mud,
Through my empty veins as I sing,
“I was murdered by a girl who once stole that empty thing.”




Copyright © Bones ... [ 2005-09-10 20:09:25]
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Re: Broken Heart of a Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:48:00 PM AEST
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Very emotional, truthful, everyone at one point in their life gets there heart broken, its not something we can prevent, but theres always someone out there falling inlove with you, you just don't know. All you can do, is lift your head high, work yourself through it, and look for the person that wants to mend you, the person who won't left you fall down that well. Good luck with everything, great write.

- Cassy


Re: Broken Heart of a Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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bones! ahh! you've got to get away from this girl. i know you love her and all... but if she's hurting you this much... please. don't let her. go along with cassie- lift your head up high. and walk away. you know i don't like to see you in pain! please, take care of yourself and cure your heart. only one thing i wish i could do from here in NY. don't let anyone hurt you, bones!

okay, okay. i'll admit it was a great write, filled with lots of pain... too much pain. keep up the terrific work, but take care of yourself for me!

~sprints


Re: Broken Heart of a Broken Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 03:23:37 AM AEST
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This is well expressed, and conveys your pain well. Pain that, heaven willing, you will live to see the far side of with new strength.

Keep it up.

Andrew




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