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People selling clothes that show off every inch of your body.
People getting molested,
and people getting raped.
Music sending out bad messages,
and movies getting kids to do things they shouldn't.

Our world is making young girls and teens get the wrong idea.
Stars are dressing in the tightest, most revealing clothes.
They show girls that it's ok to dress like that.

What about the kids who see it?
What about the girls who think they're fat or ugly
becasue they don't look like the starts do?
What if your crticized for being you?

Our world is turning horrible.
People are turning horrible,
as other people are turning their lives around.
Why is our world like this?

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Our World

Contributed by Strawberry on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

What is happening to our world?
People selling clothes that show off every inch of your body.
People getting molested,
and people getting raped.
Music sending out bad messages,
and movies getting kids to do things they shouldn't.

Our world is making young girls and teens get the wrong idea.
Stars are dressing in the tightest, most revealing clothes.
They show girls that it's ok to dress like that.

What about the kids who see it?
What about the girls who think they're fat or ugly
becasue they don't look like the starts do?
What if your crticized for being you?

Our world is turning horrible.
People are turning horrible,
as other people are turning their lives around.
Why is our world like this?

Copyright © Strawberry ... [ 2005-09-10 14:55:37]
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Re: Our World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:00:26 PM AEST
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its good to no im not the only person who feels this way...great write keep it up

Re: Our World (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:20:08 PM AEST
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Hello there,
I'd like to say that questions and answers you provide us in your poem are as old as the world itself. The world is the same. There is always something in there makes us think 'O,the blessed old days used to be better..' Thousands years we complain but do nothing...
Thanks for sharing,
Alex

Re: Our World (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:33:07 PM AEST
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Well, our world has always been like that, some of the times even worst than it is now.

Re: Our World (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 06:40:23 PM AEST
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nice write but whats wrong with our world stems from the parents. dead beat dads drunken mothers
broken homes and lazy parents who blame others

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