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I was his angel
he was my hero
until one day he died

Our love was only a dream
I was beautiful to him
his world was me
wrapped in my siloutte he stayed
until the day he died
my hero was my downfall

but once upon a moment
I was beautiful to him
as he was everything to me

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Beautiful to him

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 12:51:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Beautiful to him
I was his angel
he was my hero
until one day he died

Our love was only a dream
I was beautiful to him
his world was me
wrapped in my siloutte he stayed
until the day he died
my hero was my downfall

but once upon a moment
I was beautiful to him
as he was everything to me

JENNI

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Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 12:56:30 PM AEST
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This must have been very hard to write. My heart goes out to you for sharing such a heart felt poem.

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:09:51 PM AEST
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Hmm this could apply on more than one level.
I like that you write about it, but don't quite spell it out...and it flows well too.

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by findingmyself107 on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 04:56:05 PM AEST
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i think this poem is really amazing the way you just out your feelings out there...good work

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:38:11 PM AEST
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Jen this was just so sad. A really poetic write.

I love the flow of this write. Good to see you posting again.

Jane~

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 11:19:25 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing the emotion which you expressed quite well here. It's very good writing and i enjoyed (yet emotionally sad) it a lot. I think it was probably hard to write too and thankful you could share it with us for us to feel the emotion too. :)

Tim

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:49:22 PM AEST
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sad -yet makes me remember I was once loved- thank you for writing this- glad I found it today
Peace and Light

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by UrMyInspiration on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:02:32 PM AEST
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I love every word of this beautiful poem. You are so talented...

Re: Beautiful to him (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:24:40 AM AEST
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This is beautiful to me a true gem stone in the form of love as always great passion and conviction. Lovely peice of poetry. Nice style you have.

myheartsvoice

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