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Array ( [sid] => 105147 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rat stuck in an deep dark new hole [time] => 2005-09-06 06:40:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => An strange beauty
That I have
Is to stay silenced
And unaware by others
Yet aware by others I am
But maybe I am the one
Who is aware of the others
But I don't want to know about
Yet again what do I know about them
Nothing
So why
Why should I bother know anything
About them
Then again why not
Or why not stay silenced
For the whole year
Like I haven't done that before
I just feel like an rat
Lost in the sewers
Falling in to an new hole
Loaded with other rats
Socializing with each other
Even after me new rats
Keep falling in to the new hole
Immediately socializing
With the other rats
While I sit lonely
In an corner
Trying to seek an way out
To get to my old hole
Where I know many
Now I know so little
Better to say no one
All my ways gone crumbled
Beneath my feet's
Though very little of my ways still stand
And all the other rats
In the new hole
Might look
And all of them might
Think like hey why is she so open
There
And closed
Here
They might get mad
And then I am truly outside
The new hole
And to get back
I cant get back in
Neither cant I get out
I am trapped like an

Rat stuck in an deep dark new hole [comments] => 0 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 13 [informant] => naijerana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Rat stuck in an deep dark new hole

Contributed by naijerana on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 06:40:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



An strange beauty
That I have
Is to stay silenced
And unaware by others
Yet aware by others I am
But maybe I am the one
Who is aware of the others
But I don't want to know about
Yet again what do I know about them
Nothing
So why
Why should I bother know anything
About them
Then again why not
Or why not stay silenced
For the whole year
Like I haven't done that before
I just feel like an rat
Lost in the sewers
Falling in to an new hole
Loaded with other rats
Socializing with each other
Even after me new rats
Keep falling in to the new hole
Immediately socializing
With the other rats
While I sit lonely
In an corner
Trying to seek an way out
To get to my old hole
Where I know many
Now I know so little
Better to say no one
All my ways gone crumbled
Beneath my feet's
Though very little of my ways still stand
And all the other rats
In the new hole
Might look
And all of them might
Think like hey why is she so open
There
And closed
Here
They might get mad
And then I am truly outside
The new hole
And to get back
I cant get back in
Neither cant I get out
I am trapped like an

Rat stuck in an deep dark new hole




Copyright © naijerana ... [ 2005-09-06 06:40:04]
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