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Long drawn nails in ribbon rimmed
An empty dusty frosty street
Where two lonely journeymen happened to meet
Their brows so soaked in age and soap
Bubbling rays of shattered hope.
Nod to each other whilst passing by
They furiously try to blink their eyes
But alas, the lids stick tight
Where they can see each strand of light,
Burning away into small sockets
When they pull them out to drop in pockets.
Blind with rage and swollen hate
Steaming red and very irate.
But here I am, fellow man to travelling skin.
I fix the problems outside in.
And I wash dirty eyes and purify souls.
I repair each of their rotting holes.
But my own grow deeper, wider, and darker,
Until my feelings become a shark's purr
Erratic and violent with a heart of lead,
Fingers made of juice and a bullet in my head. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => AssassinatorGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Life Cycle of a Heap of Fat

Contributed by AssassinatorGirl on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 04:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dark and stormy torrents of wind
Long drawn nails in ribbon rimmed
An empty dusty frosty street
Where two lonely journeymen happened to meet
Their brows so soaked in age and soap
Bubbling rays of shattered hope.
Nod to each other whilst passing by
They furiously try to blink their eyes
But alas, the lids stick tight
Where they can see each strand of light,
Burning away into small sockets
When they pull them out to drop in pockets.
Blind with rage and swollen hate
Steaming red and very irate.
But here I am, fellow man to travelling skin.
I fix the problems outside in.
And I wash dirty eyes and purify souls.
I repair each of their rotting holes.
But my own grow deeper, wider, and darker,
Until my feelings become a shark's purr
Erratic and violent with a heart of lead,
Fingers made of juice and a bullet in my head.

Copyright © AssassinatorGirl ... [ 2005-09-03 16:16:05]
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Re: Life Cycle of a Heap of Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:33:42 PM AEST
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this was great. the descriptions were really good and well thought out. i love the ending, to mend then need mending, always hand in hand. heres a 5!. keep up the good work
-trini

Re: Life Cycle of a Heap of Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by gary on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:04:20 PM AEST
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thank you for that poem I do not know why but for some reason I teanding to like Dark P more than the others, keep up the work!

Re: Life Cycle of a Heap of Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:09:42 PM AEST
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What a splendid title ! I loved it just for that alone...

Colin

Re: Life Cycle of a Heap of Fat (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:07:52 PM AEST
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this is like..wow... awesome
cool title, awesome descriptions, great poem!

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