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Array ( [sid] => 10487 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Connected Forever [time] => 2003-01-15 18:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw an eagle fly across the sky
heading to the south
his wings did fly
The States is were I reckon he may go
across the mountains
toward the border between our lands;you know
There are no set bounderies in his eyes
our lands are one
no hidden ties

The rivers flow through both of us
it carries nothing
not even burden or justice
it flows uncontiuosly to serve you and me
no complaints
just flows to serve us for free

Our lands are governed to part us into two
though our lands are connected
to serve both me and you.

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee [comments] => 5 [counter] => 408 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mckayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Connected Forever

Contributed by mckayla on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I saw an eagle fly across the sky
heading to the south
his wings did fly
The States is were I reckon he may go
across the mountains
toward the border between our lands;you know
There are no set bounderies in his eyes
our lands are one
no hidden ties

The rivers flow through both of us
it carries nothing
not even burden or justice
it flows uncontiuosly to serve you and me
no complaints
just flows to serve us for free

Our lands are governed to part us into two
though our lands are connected
to serve both me and you.

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee




Copyright © mckayla ... [ 2003-01-15 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Connected Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:46:27 PM AEST
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oops I screwed up!!! its supposed to say "continuously" not "uncontiuosly?"


Re: Connected Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:43:43 PM AEST
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Maybe someday there will be no borders to split the feels as well as the countries.

A nice read,
wordsy.


Re: Connected Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 02:19:41 AM AEST
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Wow Katherine you always write with such beautiful depth in your poetry...i really enjoy reading you...keep em' coming...

.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Connected Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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i agree, you do write with a lot of depth...beautiful write...


Re: Connected Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:17:29 PM AEST
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decreasing the size of the verses as you got to your point bult up the mood, very cool




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