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Array ( [sid] => 104798 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dawn of A Thousand Colors [time] => 2005-08-31 19:52:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rippling reflections of the iridescent sky
Set to flame the sphere sets the world aglow
Kindling ever stronger the calm of the days
Wence nothing could take that away
No one would ever dream
Fewer still dare to conceive
The awesome power of the veil
And the sleep we know while waking

Wander the dreamscapes
Open thy doors
All that was closed is open again

Bridges burned by the smallest of flames
To back and ring thy name
Feel the dawn sweep away such things
These hues of remembrance piled upon the past
All of mankind's future, forgotten to the last
If ever we knew the price of living
The burden of flawed consciousness
We'd see our weak incompetence

In the end we may see all that is to be
And in blindness then we may open that eye
Behold the truth for what it really is
Push back dogmatic lies burned into our souls
See that our reality is full of holes
Know that all we see are pale interpretations of reality
Until the dawn
When light shines black
Forever scarred
Like the broken wings on our back [comments] => 2 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Maxximus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
The Dawn of A Thousand Colors

Contributed by Maxximus on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Rippling reflections of the iridescent sky
Set to flame the sphere sets the world aglow
Kindling ever stronger the calm of the days
Wence nothing could take that away
No one would ever dream
Fewer still dare to conceive
The awesome power of the veil
And the sleep we know while waking

Wander the dreamscapes
Open thy doors
All that was closed is open again

Bridges burned by the smallest of flames
To back and ring thy name
Feel the dawn sweep away such things
These hues of remembrance piled upon the past
All of mankind's future, forgotten to the last
If ever we knew the price of living
The burden of flawed consciousness
We'd see our weak incompetence

In the end we may see all that is to be
And in blindness then we may open that eye
Behold the truth for what it really is
Push back dogmatic lies burned into our souls
See that our reality is full of holes
Know that all we see are pale interpretations of reality
Until the dawn
When light shines black
Forever scarred
Like the broken wings on our back




Copyright © Maxximus ... [ 2005-08-31 19:52:32]
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Re: The Dawn of A Thousand Colors (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 08:43:34 PM AEST
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Very good write. I like the flow. Keep them coming..

MaJ


Re: The Dawn of A Thousand Colors (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:26:32 PM AEST
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cryptic..............but therein lies profound meaning indeed....

wise wise words....beautiful imagery and choice of words....

A pleasure and a real masterpiece.




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