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Array ( [sid] => 104574 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodby (desert Sands) [time] => 2005-08-28 21:35:56 [hometext] => Well, basically, my life can't get worse at this moment in time, honestly. I have lost pretty much everything and i don't want to be here so tis jus kinda shows how i feel.It's Not very good though, i couldn't express my thoughts correctly. [bodytext] => I can no longer take the hiding
And the pain of which i flee!
My heart can no longer soak
All of the vilaneous ebony!
Filled with murky truth
And a love so blind
How could i be so foolish?
I young child, left behind
Just as i seem to loose it all,
I cling to a tiny little root
Upon the edge of the cliff
Abandoned, my own truth
But i'm slipping and you can't save me
Your no longer there
I scream into the midnight embers
As my body hangs; so scared
Can anyone rescue me,
From my own demise?
I've lost everything in this web,
All that's left is lies.
My hands are slipping;
I can no longer hold myself up
As i count to three I scream;
"I give up, i can no longer take this pain or suffering!"
I sob into the stars
As my fists let go
I take one final glance
Towards the man below
And with my final breath
I say just one final plea
And now I'm just a memory
Imprinted upon the desert earth
A life drowned by the sands of time
A love buried alive in the dirt



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Goodby (desert Sands)

Contributed by Ineedanap on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:35:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I can no longer take the hiding
And the pain of which i flee!
My heart can no longer soak
All of the vilaneous ebony!
Filled with murky truth
And a love so blind
How could i be so foolish?
I young child, left behind
Just as i seem to loose it all,
I cling to a tiny little root
Upon the edge of the cliff
Abandoned, my own truth
But i'm slipping and you can't save me
Your no longer there
I scream into the midnight embers
As my body hangs; so scared
Can anyone rescue me,
From my own demise?
I've lost everything in this web,
All that's left is lies.
My hands are slipping;
I can no longer hold myself up
As i count to three I scream;
"I give up, i can no longer take this pain or suffering!"
I sob into the stars
As my fists let go
I take one final glance
Towards the man below
And with my final breath
I say just one final plea
And now I'm just a memory
Imprinted upon the desert earth
A life drowned by the sands of time
A love buried alive in the dirt







Copyright © Ineedanap ... [ 2005-08-28 21:35:56]
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Re: Goodby (desert Sands) (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:29:33 PM AEST
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Great poem!Your true sorrows is well felt within this poem.When you are so sad,you close to the world...almost just drifting along,blinded by the pain.Your call will be heard...all in life happens with a reason.Today ask and tomorrow answers...Never stop believing...believe in YOU,and have faith...for all in it's right time and place.No matter how dark and gloomy it looks..there is ALWAYS light on the other side of the tunnel,always.As tough as it is at the moment...never give up,it's not worth it.Beat that sorry and crush the pain...do not give in to it,never.Life is what we make of it,and someone or something,can only upset one's as much ,as one allows them to.True happiness and strength comes from within,but you have to take a good look in times like this to see it.Stay strong and keep believing...the answers you seek...all in time.Reflect,deal with the sorrow,carry with you what you choose...and release the rest.You CAN.


Re: Goodby (desert Sands) (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 12:18:07 PM AEST
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This is so sad
I hope that you find a happy place
someday soon.


Re: Goodby (desert Sands) (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:29:03 PM AEST
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Very sad and full of pain. I hope that this day finds you better and healed from the pain.




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