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Array ( [sid] => 104408 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Bowery [time] => 2005-08-25 23:16:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can’t wait one minute more
There is something that needs to escape
Something tells me to run out that kitchen door

I can’t stand the sight of it, it’s just not right is it?
How can someone be so cruel and terribly wicked?

Especially on such a beautiful glowing star filled night

Sorry, I can’t accept your gift of charity
I won’t be made a case of, in case you’ve found love
In the occurrence that I don’t return
In the event the world begins to burn

Then perhaps one last kiss

We will all be gone

Consider it a lesson learned

A critique of the behavior absurd

Comical to the point of an hysterical dirty word

We will all remember

We will always be heard

I can’t take this heat much longer
Feels like I’m melting inside
Feels like the wax has settled and has engulfed my
Inside, used again
Has clotted my blood
And has brought the pain

My lungs

Air sacks burst

No air

Just a dry desert thirst





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The Bowery

Contributed by Lancaster on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:16:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I can’t wait one minute more
There is something that needs to escape
Something tells me to run out that kitchen door

I can’t stand the sight of it, it’s just not right is it?
How can someone be so cruel and terribly wicked?

Especially on such a beautiful glowing star filled night

Sorry, I can’t accept your gift of charity
I won’t be made a case of, in case you’ve found love
In the occurrence that I don’t return
In the event the world begins to burn

Then perhaps one last kiss

We will all be gone

Consider it a lesson learned

A critique of the behavior absurd

Comical to the point of an hysterical dirty word

We will all remember

We will always be heard

I can’t take this heat much longer
Feels like I’m melting inside
Feels like the wax has settled and has engulfed my
Inside, used again
Has clotted my blood
And has brought the pain

My lungs

Air sacks burst

No air

Just a dry desert thirst





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__________________




Copyright © Lancaster ... [ 2005-08-25 23:16:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Bowery (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:43:08 PM AEST
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We've got to get you a date...pronto; )

Style and substance were both very good, as was the title, but I must say...I think your argument is weak amigo: )

Scorp.
(Who had a laugh over a certain someone's panic attack) lol


Re: The Bowery (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:46:23 AM AEST
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interesting write like the style very diffrent thoughts though


Re: The Bowery (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:23:21 AM AEST
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I think this is a great write. The picture in my mind is too wierd to describe that this poem brings. But believe me if that happened to me I would probably run too.




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