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Array ( [sid] => 103912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone (cheating on your partner) [time] => 2005-08-19 10:18:26 [hometext] => This is probably the stupidest poem ever written by anyone but I wrote it in like 15 minutes so cut me some slack. [bodytext] => I stared into your eyes,
so full of sparkle, so full of shine.
You were happier in those times,
Those days that you were mine.

I ripped out your heart and stomped it to the ground,
no wonder now that you're not around.
I listen for your voice but I hear no sound.
Saying I'm sorry isn't enough I've found.

I was young and stupid back in those days.
The days before you went away.
I wish that there was more to say.
But you're gone forever to my dismay.

I loved our little family,
and I lost it all forever you see.
Because I found someone else for me.
but I didn't wait for you to leave.

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Gone (cheating on your partner)

Contributed by twobabies on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:18:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I stared into your eyes,
so full of sparkle, so full of shine.
You were happier in those times,
Those days that you were mine.

I ripped out your heart and stomped it to the ground,
no wonder now that you're not around.
I listen for your voice but I hear no sound.
Saying I'm sorry isn't enough I've found.

I was young and stupid back in those days.
The days before you went away.
I wish that there was more to say.
But you're gone forever to my dismay.

I loved our little family,
and I lost it all forever you see.
Because I found someone else for me.
but I didn't wait for you to leave.

Copyright © twobabies ... [ 2005-08-19 10:18:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone (cheating on your partner) (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 10:51:07 AM AEST
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this is a very nice poem shows lots of feelings well done keep it up
all my love, hope and hugges
jenny
xxx

Re: Gone (cheating on your partner) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:19:15 PM AEST
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sad and heart breaking, well written,
we all make mistakes so we can learn and grow from them
pix xx

Re: Gone (cheating on your partner) (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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Good job baby girl! I really like it!
juliette!

Re: Gone (cheating on your partner) (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:43:31 PM AEST
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Not bad not bad at all...even fora 15 minute poem...bravo

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