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Array ( [sid] => 103895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Concrete Mirrors [time] => 2005-08-19 01:49:06 [hometext] => To give yourself entirely; your trust and love, to another is very difficult. These things run rampant in our minds from day to day. The fear of abandoment. This poem is a metaphor for that. [bodytext] => To see the day when it all comes down
The final eclipse of majesty
Grey prophet bearing the liars crown
Traversing the earth from land and sea
The magnificent edifice falls
Bowing before the believers calls

Poets scream in rhymed lines of silence
In this society of idiot tyrants
Blasphemy is the new eloquence
When none may forgive and won't recant
The 13th sun descending on us
Lies so cloying and truth so vicious

Upon a throne of wires the sycophant never tires
Spreading a gospel of atomic reign and acid rain
With a tongue of fire that knows all of our desires
Staring at the wall without error, holding back terrors
The final mystery of humanity is revealed
Reflected crystal clear in the sheen of concrete mirrors

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Concrete Mirrors

Contributed by misled_beauty on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:49:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



To see the day when it all comes down
The final eclipse of majesty
Grey prophet bearing the liars crown
Traversing the earth from land and sea
The magnificent edifice falls
Bowing before the believers calls

Poets scream in rhymed lines of silence
In this society of idiot tyrants
Blasphemy is the new eloquence
When none may forgive and won't recant
The 13th sun descending on us
Lies so cloying and truth so vicious

Upon a throne of wires the sycophant never tires
Spreading a gospel of atomic reign and acid rain
With a tongue of fire that knows all of our desires
Staring at the wall without error, holding back terrors
The final mystery of humanity is revealed
Reflected crystal clear in the sheen of concrete mirrors





Copyright © misled_beauty ... [ 2005-08-19 01:49:06]
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Re: Concrete Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 01:56:37 AM AEST
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I loved this poem, I loved the ending, good write. SLipSiX.


Re: Concrete Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:10:13 AM AEST
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Very impressive writing. Awesomly unique.
good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: Concrete Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 02:13:10 AM AEST
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deliciously intruiging...
I really enjoyes reading it..
-glass


Re: Concrete Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:04:52 PM AEST
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I like the subject of this poem..very original.Well done!


Re: Concrete Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by RLSS on Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:19:39 PM AEST
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Intruiging and powerful. Has so many meanings.




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