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Take away the lonely nights, all the lonesome years
Take me to a better place, please take me by the hand
There’ve been so many others, who didn’t understand

If I bring you pretty roses, the best that I can find
Will you sing to me of rivers, to help me ease my mind?
If you tell me pretty love words, then I will do the same
There’ve been so many others, who never asked my name

They’d look at me and wonder, what’s he thinking of
When all I’ve ever longed for was only to be loved…
So tell me that I’m handsome, and all your pretty lies
Come along and love me, with little loving sighs

And even if you leave me, please pretend your love is true
There’ve been so many others, there might as well be you... [comments] => 8 [counter] => 304 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

there've been so many others...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:45:31 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Comfort me with smiles, wipe away all of my tears
Take away the lonely nights, all the lonesome years
Take me to a better place, please take me by the hand
There’ve been so many others, who didn’t understand

If I bring you pretty roses, the best that I can find
Will you sing to me of rivers, to help me ease my mind?
If you tell me pretty love words, then I will do the same
There’ve been so many others, who never asked my name

They’d look at me and wonder, what’s he thinking of
When all I’ve ever longed for was only to be loved…
So tell me that I’m handsome, and all your pretty lies
Come along and love me, with little loving sighs

And even if you leave me, please pretend your love is true
There’ve been so many others, there might as well be you...

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2005-08-16 01:45:31]
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Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:48:15 AM AEST
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Omg this was a very good poem, I loved it, I can relate to what you are saying in this poem, I loved it, very good write, keep it up. SLipSiX.

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:52:17 AM AEST
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One word: Amazing. I love this so much and I understand where you're coming from. This is, wow, I don't know what to say, how to describe what I think.

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:17:23 AM AEST
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Remarkably written.
Very unique.
huggs,
emy

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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i'm speachless. beautifully written.The ending made me a little sad but still wondeful. Thanks for sharing

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:42:20 AM AEST
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Not at all what I expected. Great title, great words, great write!

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:44:59 PM AEST
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Gosh, it is hard to not cry upon reading this. It just breaks my heart. Your words are so lovely yet so very sad. I just don't know what else to say. Maybe to someone you are all those things you long to be or maybe soon you will find the right person---who will make you feel loved. I wish for you.

Kie

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:58:16 AM AEST
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This write, is extradinary. Wow...................excellent piece. True form your heart........seems you understand it, but just look in wrong places.! Thanks for posting.

Brew~

Re: there've been so many others... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 12:31:44 PM AEST
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Great write. I understand how you feel and hope that true love will find you one day.

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