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Array ( [sid] => 103096 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Screaming through my innards. [time] => 2005-08-09 17:25:16 [hometext] => Here's a tip; NEVER date some one when you're depressed, 'coz as much as you may like them at the time, they'll proberly take advantage of your depression, and make you feel worse or guilty! Please comment on here! [bodytext] => …It hit me like a punch,
Those words that he said.
And it completely tore me up.
Pushed me through my past, I can’t forget.

Now black holes stab through me.
Hurting me. Making me guilty.
I feel so torn and empty.
I’m back at what gave me other’s pity.

…And I’ve just finished it with my boy-friend.
‘Coz he said things I can’t forget.
And if he can’t treat me with a little respect,
Then honestly, what-is-left?

And I’m already too low to be stronger.
And don’t need this pain any longer.
So when he said those things I wondered,
What he’d be like in the future…

He said he wanted to help me through it,
But also talked to me like I’m a ‘slut’.
And at first I didn’t mind it,
Until I found out he gets under-aged girls up the ‘duff’

And he knows I was abused as a kid,
Yet, told me he could abuse me and get away with it…
Then said he was joking when he said it,
But I’m to broken to take him back and forget it.

And it’s not like we were together ages.
But some how a thousands lows have come back.
I feel like I’m falling down,
And I’m completely ready to snap.

My emotion is over whelming.
Making me feel like I should be guilty.
He said he loved me, and seemed caring,
But he’s left me cold, with my innards and screaming…!
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Screaming through my innards.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



…It hit me like a punch,
Those words that he said.
And it completely tore me up.
Pushed me through my past, I can’t forget.

Now black holes stab through me.
Hurting me. Making me guilty.
I feel so torn and empty.
I’m back at what gave me other’s pity.

…And I’ve just finished it with my boy-friend.
‘Coz he said things I can’t forget.
And if he can’t treat me with a little respect,
Then honestly, what-is-left?

And I’m already too low to be stronger.
And don’t need this pain any longer.
So when he said those things I wondered,
What he’d be like in the future…

He said he wanted to help me through it,
But also talked to me like I’m a ‘slut’.
And at first I didn’t mind it,
Until I found out he gets under-aged girls up the ‘duff’

And he knows I was abused as a kid,
Yet, told me he could abuse me and get away with it…
Then said he was joking when he said it,
But I’m to broken to take him back and forget it.

And it’s not like we were together ages.
But some how a thousands lows have come back.
I feel like I’m falling down,
And I’m completely ready to snap.

My emotion is over whelming.
Making me feel like I should be guilty.
He said he loved me, and seemed caring,
But he’s left me cold, with my innards and screaming…!




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Re: Screaming through my innards. (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:02:26 PM AEST
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If you find the right guy, you won't have to worry if you're depressed or happy because he'll love and support you either way but you know how people say you must love yourself before you love someone else? it's so true.

Don't worry about this guy obviously he doesn't know the definition of a joke and probably took his words back after he realized he hurt you, but what he said about him abusing you shouldn't have been said in the first place and should not be called a joke.

Good write. Keep it up!


Re: Screaming through my innards. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sbhottie288 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:07:27 PM AEST
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this is a great poem... i had a guy like that... but i found out he was a child molester after we broke up... things get better.. i promise you... well i just started here and i just put up my first poem... take a look please and tell me what you think.. thanks, dee


Re: Screaming through my innards. (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:12:52 PM AEST
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Some people have no compassion for the pain of others. But you have to rise above him and refuse to let him bring you back down. Don't give up ever. Just keep fighting the pain. Love does not hurt, sweetie, physically or emotionally. There may be disagreements but they are worked out like mature people should. It you love someone you do not hurt them. He is of no loss. Be strong, please and keep climbing up in spite of everything. You have made it this far, why stop now?

Hugs,
Rita

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Re: Screaming through my innards. (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:25:42 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece, so well expressed. I commend anyone who publicises a part of their life that is so personal to them alone. This is fantastic, and I'm going to resist saying I'm sorry for you.

Instead I'd like to say that you sound as if you are someone who has ample mental strength to overcome this chapter in your life and move on to better fortunes in the future. I wish you well for all the future holds.

Colin


Re: Screaming through my innards. (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:07:47 PM AEST
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you are so talented at channeling your emotions into great words...i just broke up with my boyfriend...depression and relationships are a ***** mix




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