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Array ( [sid] => 102927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Love Ring [time] => 2005-08-07 17:13:05 [hometext] => A gift misunderstood [bodytext] => Amazing how a little thing
So significent as this
Can say everything
But yet say nothing at all

This special gift,
Thought to be given out of love...
Enscription taken out of context
Misled by the hidden meaning

Written in a foreign text,
Unknown for all
Only two know the true words
On this elvish love ring,

Enscripted as followed:

One ring to show our love,
One ring to bind us,
One ring to seal our love
And forever to entwine us....

~~ Nats~~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Love Ring

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Amazing how a little thing
So significent as this
Can say everything
But yet say nothing at all

This special gift,
Thought to be given out of love...
Enscription taken out of context
Misled by the hidden meaning

Written in a foreign text,
Unknown for all
Only two know the true words
On this elvish love ring,

Enscripted as followed:

One ring to show our love,
One ring to bind us,
One ring to seal our love
And forever to entwine us....

~~ Nats~~

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-08-07 17:13:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Love Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:30:04 PM AEST
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aww nat another heartful poem, but good u getting ur feeling like u've always told me
keep writing and getting them out

hugggggggs
Rosey

Re: The Love Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:37:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece once again.
I know the pain and confusion this gift has caused and I hope that everything works out ok for you
Good luck

Steve

Re: The Love Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:01:18 AM AEST
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Your writing is absolutely brilliant. I am so glad I found your poems and plan to read them all.

Obviosuly your gift of writing is phenomenal.

I don't see how the inscription and / or gift could be misunderstood as love is universal....no matter the language, the inscription is clear.

It appears the giver of the gift was being deceitful. Am I interpreting that correctly?

Thank you very much for sharing your artful talent.

Tim
:)

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