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Array ( [sid] => 102806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => drunken thoughts [time] => 2005-08-06 05:10:28 [hometext] => poetry when i have been drinking comment if you want [bodytext] => another year another way
thirty one to count the day
another mile a soul to pay
another way to go my way

done in sin they way i stay
another word for the games i play
down in the pit my deed i pay
lost in this world this line i stray

long list of rhyming lines
words that slip like my mind
towers that crumbe line after time
walking threw this nightmare of crime
bleeding system a rotten part
the one that will bring you world apart
why is it that only some of the blind can see
this isnt the world we want it to be

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

drunken thoughts

Contributed by lostrelic on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 05:10:28 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

another year another way
thirty one to count the day
another mile a soul to pay
another way to go my way

done in sin they way i stay
another word for the games i play
down in the pit my deed i pay
lost in this world this line i stray

long list of rhyming lines
words that slip like my mind
towers that crumbe line after time
walking threw this nightmare of crime
bleeding system a rotten part
the one that will bring you world apart
why is it that only some of the blind can see
this isnt the world we want it to be

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-08-06 05:10:28]
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Re: drunken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 05:27:57 AM AEST
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Well I would have known u were drinking if it weren't for the title.
Very touching write andd happy, happy birthday again.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Very good writing, my friend.

Re: drunken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:49:27 PM AEST
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Excellent poem, I loved it, that is really what you think about huh, sounds like a whole different world, I loved ending it was the best. SLipSiX.

Re: drunken thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:23:59 AM AEST
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Not bad, not at all bad. I like the question of the end.

Andrew

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