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Array ( [sid] => 102700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => --untitled-- [time] => 2005-08-05 00:06:57 [hometext] => alright this is my friend bryan's work he never posts anything but i thought this should be out there i really like it. please comment [bodytext] =>
Bleeding hearts starved from love and care,
Accursed hands stained with acts of treason.
High upon a hill lays the coveted truth,
Buried underneath a mountain of bones.
To find the meaning, first comes the end,
True satisfaction is wrought with guilt.

Albeit the rising tides have caused your death,
Endlessly falling, surrounded by a sea of boundless sorrow.

The future is so unclear, so many "what if's",
But it never mattered when I was yours.
You would always reassure me of a new beginning,
Betrothed to a higher calling.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => trini [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

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Contributed by trini on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:06:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bleeding hearts starved from love and care,
Accursed hands stained with acts of treason.
High upon a hill lays the coveted truth,
Buried underneath a mountain of bones.
To find the meaning, first comes the end,
True satisfaction is wrought with guilt.

Albeit the rising tides have caused your death,
Endlessly falling, surrounded by a sea of boundless sorrow.

The future is so unclear, so many "what if's",
But it never mattered when I was yours.
You would always reassure me of a new beginning,
Betrothed to a higher calling.

Copyright © trini ... [ 2005-08-05 00:06:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: --untitled-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:39:09 AM AEST
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Interesting, to bad he does not post more of his own work, and the please comment seemed to make me not want to read it but I wanted to give a shot.

Re: --untitled-- (User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:41:19 AM AEST
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That was sad but very good. Your friend is a great writer.

Re: --untitled-- (User Rating: 1 )
by deepviolet on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:24:24 AM AEST
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he's a great poet. the poem is emotional and very descriptive. thanks for sharing it.

Re: --untitled-- (User Rating: 1 )
by RebelRose on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:29:48 PM AEST
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tell ur friend i really enjoyed reading it and that he should post more of his work

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