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endeavor failing
mazes clash
lunatic profusion

infinity meditation
series,chain and standstill
shock in delusions
shouting mind

drought forbears
convert walls
towing jewels
shine illuminates

feathered sky
a blooming tempest
black and shade
mists overthrow

natural occurrences
this cycle shakes
winding paths
this balance.

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Grit

Contributed by Vampire_Slander on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:45:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Be my speed
endeavor failing
mazes clash
lunatic profusion

infinity meditation
series,chain and standstill
shock in delusions
shouting mind

drought forbears
convert walls
towing jewels
shine illuminates

feathered sky
a blooming tempest
black and shade
mists overthrow

natural occurrences
this cycle shakes
winding paths
this balance.

Copyright © Vampire_Slander ... [ 2005-08-03 20:45:27]
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Re: Grit (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:25:11 PM AEST
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I can't say I understood it .. but I read it .. does that count at all?

Re: Grit (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:35:11 PM AEST
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I love the words you used...they were very vibrant. thanks for sharing it with me.

stew

Re: Grit (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:54:47 PM AEST
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I didn't understand it either, maybe u should expand just a litte....but then again what do I know.......thank you for it though

C.

Re: Grit (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 10:09:10 PM AEST
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This was kinda good. Intresting rhyme scheme, but really good.Full emotion.
PM me anytime.

T

Re: Grit (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 01:31:17 AM AEST
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I would like it better if the images were framed by a more unified voice through the lines and stanzas, as it is they feel somewhat disjointed. But it is good work, the images are well-portrayed, and I like the theme. Good work.

Andrew

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