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Array ( [sid] => 102501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2005-08-02 12:48:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There comes a time to say goodbye
To let go, and stop holding onto the lie.
I have loved you more than I should
You loved me all you could.

There is something you need
Something missing, that I cannot feed.
A feeling or a thought
Something earned, not bought.

Someday you may find you
Someday maybe you won't be blue.
Till then I have to let you go
Let my heart break, let the tears flow.

I hope with all my heart for your happiness
But for now we must both embrace the emptiness.
I will cry and probably cry alot
But this love is just not meant to be, it's just not.

Friends we may someday be
But there is nothing left here to see.
I love you, however, that is not enough
Time to step up and be tough.

So for now we must part
Seperate lives to start.
So you go your way, baby
And I will go mine, maybe.

But above all remember I loved you best
But somehow we failed the final test.
Time to say goodbye for good
All is said and all is done, but never understood. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Monkeybones99 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Goodbye

Contributed by Monkeybones99 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 12:48:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

There comes a time to say goodbye
To let go, and stop holding onto the lie.
I have loved you more than I should
You loved me all you could.

There is something you need
Something missing, that I cannot feed.
A feeling or a thought
Something earned, not bought.

Someday you may find you
Someday maybe you won't be blue.
Till then I have to let you go
Let my heart break, let the tears flow.

I hope with all my heart for your happiness
But for now we must both embrace the emptiness.
I will cry and probably cry alot
But this love is just not meant to be, it's just not.

Friends we may someday be
But there is nothing left here to see.
I love you, however, that is not enough
Time to step up and be tough.

So for now we must part
Seperate lives to start.
So you go your way, baby
And I will go mine, maybe.

But above all remember I loved you best
But somehow we failed the final test.
Time to say goodbye for good
All is said and all is done, but never understood.

Copyright © Monkeybones99 ... [ 2005-08-02 12:48:27]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:29:29 PM AEST
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amazing...the feelings and how well you put the entire piece together is just.. amazing. I can relate to the majority of it and that's just the best part of poetry

i love the last stanza especially, a sad ending but strong.

dw

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:26:19 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. I can partially relate to the content as well.

Colin

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by solosoul on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:50:40 PM AEST
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that is one of the most negative but yet positive poems i ever read im impressed

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by solosoul on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:23:05 PM AEST
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this one is gonna be hard to forget

Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:33:33 PM AEST
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so sad with such honest yet real lines like 'Friends we may someday be
But there is nothing left here to see' really liked this piece - it got the thumbs up by me!!!

feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated
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