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[sid] => 102384
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[aid] => mick
[title] => I can`t watch
[time] => 2005-07-31 20:01:41
[hometext] => I wrote this after a good friend of mine had told me how he felt. This friend of mine is allsow one of my favorite writer, so when I dedicate a poem to him, I would love it to be the best... So any help on how to make the poem better are aprisiated!
[bodytext] => I can`t stand here watching you fall apart I can`t see your tears and pretend I don`t care How should I respond when you say, I’ll be gone soon? Is there any way I can convince you, it isn`t true? I know your mind is made up, that it all to soon will be true But until that day has come I am here for you And we will make each other to see the present time Not hide away in the past, but remember there is a future too [comments] => 3 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 16 [informant] => gunda [notes] => |||||||Incorrect spelling has been corrected, as requested. ---Moderator_14||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
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