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Array ( [sid] => 102010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Note [time] => 2005-07-24 23:15:20 [hometext] => What to say? Just read it...then you'll know what it's about! [bodytext] => You left with no word
No letter, only a note
‘I’m not coming back’
Is all you wrote

Why would you leave?
And do this to me?
I love you so much
Don’t you see?

Where did you go?
What did I do?
‘Cause all I ever did
Was love you

Didn’t you love me?
Or was it all just a lie
‘Cause we’ve been together forever
And you didn’t even say goodbye

What’s wrong with you?
How could you do this?
You probably won’t miss me
But you, I will miss

I just need you to tell me why
But you’re nowhere to be found
But it isn’t fair
‘Cause to your love, I am bound

It’s as if
I’m bound by chains
And it isn’t right
Because of all this pain

So why can’t you help me out?
And make me hate you
But the question is
Do you want to hate me too?
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Misunderstood_gurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The Note

Contributed by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:15:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You left with no word
No letter, only a note
‘I’m not coming back’
Is all you wrote

Why would you leave?
And do this to me?
I love you so much
Don’t you see?

Where did you go?
What did I do?
‘Cause all I ever did
Was love you

Didn’t you love me?
Or was it all just a lie
‘Cause we’ve been together forever
And you didn’t even say goodbye

What’s wrong with you?
How could you do this?
You probably won’t miss me
But you, I will miss

I just need you to tell me why
But you’re nowhere to be found
But it isn’t fair
‘Cause to your love, I am bound

It’s as if
I’m bound by chains
And it isn’t right
Because of all this pain

So why can’t you help me out?
And make me hate you
But the question is
Do you want to hate me too?




Copyright © Misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-07-24 23:15:20]
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Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by namesaretaken on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 11:22:37 PM AEST
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That is very sad to read about ....I hope you are O.K. nice write though
~nat~


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by grin69 on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:23:48 AM AEST
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hello. Oh my god! this happend to me!!! I drove 1 hr to visit a bf, when I got to his apartment it was totally empty! no note, no explanation, nothing! OUCH! Just like me, you will heal. grin


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:02:05 PM AEST
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ouch. people are idiots. especially the 'you' in this poem. he shouldn't have hurt you like this. and i have been hurt many time... like this, but not even with a note. it hurts. but i'm still alive. so, just hang in there and talk to me if you need to. lots of luck!

~sprints

p.s. this was a good write (even through the pain), keep up the good work!


Re: The Note (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:04:21 PM AEST
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once again great write. people can be dicks. some are so ***** stupid and it's frustrating. i like also that the poem could have a different meaning. it could mean that someone you love walked out on ya or it could mean that someone you love took their own life. i really like that. as i said before. you are an awsome writer. keep the words coming.




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