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my paper is so plane
makes me go insain
trying to figer out what to say
befor christmas day
people call me dumb
but there all plums
trying to write whats on my mind
befor i go blind
cant think of a thing
he gave me a ring
i think ill start to sing
i geuse i had something to say after all
time to go to the mall [comments] => 7 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => paul_x_walker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

what to write

Contributed by paul_x_walker on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:57:42 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

my paper is so plane
makes me go insain
trying to figer out what to say
befor christmas day
people call me dumb
but there all plums
trying to write whats on my mind
befor i go blind
cant think of a thing
he gave me a ring
i think ill start to sing
i geuse i had something to say after all
time to go to the mall

Copyright © paul_x_walker ... [ 2005-07-24 02:57:42]
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Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:06:56 AM AEST
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hey, this is not dumb at all.. its cute.. funny.. charming.. I love it.. looks like you have your plans set.. great job.. I enjoyed this poem..

Raquel Leah

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:33:57 AM AEST
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read my poems. they even come from a dumb mind. nice to share.
girish

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by syenn0512 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 05:25:43 AM AEST
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Hey.....its not dumb....
Pretty entertaining.. and its funny...
Good Job..!! :)

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:05:49 AM AEST
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You have tons of typo, was that intentional? If it was then it was good; and if not check your spelling.

Jane~

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by aplsdka on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:14:04 PM AEST
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Hey, that's a really really cool poem. Just the way i like them. Pretty random. Yeah, the spelling's a bit off, but otherwise, it's awesome.

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:53:09 AM AEST
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I thought it was very good Jenny.

love mom.

Re: what to write (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:48:31 AM AEST
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I was looking for a safe topic, subject, well, I saw your name, I liked your nickname.

Yeah, save it for a rainy day, better yet, let them speak for you on the outside of the world, you speak your heart, you are a brave soul, I applaud, for you not to spill your guts, yet, I understand deeply where your soul is:>

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So I say this, dream along the dream path of extra nightmares that face the fall of the days we meet in the sunny shadows of life:>

Meagan writes:>

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