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Butterflies raging
The thought of you
Seeing your smiling face

In me mind, arms reaching out
Out to hug you and hold you
Not daring to act upon it
I turn away and long
For your huggings

Me body trembling
Debating should I say
The unspoken words
That lay upon me mind

Not able to find the right words
Unsure of the reaction
I keep silence and just smile
At the presence of you

~~Nats~~ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Presence Of You

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 07:36:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Heart skipping beats
Butterflies raging
The thought of you
Seeing your smiling face

In me mind, arms reaching out
Out to hug you and hold you
Not daring to act upon it
I turn away and long
For your huggings

Me body trembling
Debating should I say
The unspoken words
That lay upon me mind

Not able to find the right words
Unsure of the reaction
I keep silence and just smile
At the presence of you

~~Nats~~

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Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:44:08 PM AEST
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i believe we all feel this way when we truely care for someone

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by rosethorn100 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:22:06 PM AEST
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lovely poem as always, it always hard when we around someone we love and don't give back, we yearn them, yet we afraid to make a move of the uncertain reaction.

I hope things work out for u both

huggggggggggggs
rosey xxx

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST
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Sometimes feeling that are so deep and so strong should be shown, whatever the consequences.
Of course, easier to say it than do it.

Steve

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:13:53 AM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me, Nats. Another beautiful write from you. How I can oooooh so much relate to this one. “Not able to find the right words - Unsure of the reaction” Can definitely relate. As always, thank you for sharing your gifted talent with us.

Huggs,

Tim
:-)

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:24:18 AM AEST
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Hehe Nats,
I liked this. :D

Made me get butterflies
in my stomach, from merely reading it.

In particular, I liked the last two lines:
"I keep silence and just smile
At the presence of you",
mainly because I found them powerful,
and.. sometimes, with words,
less is more.

Great stuff,
keep writing!

*hugs*

~KayT

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:59:43 PM AEST
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this is good. you have a simple way of presenting deep things.

Re: The Presence Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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Lovely and y not a poem about a most heart warming subject, love that line" not daring to
act on it " amazing ain't it how hard love can be to express yet anger seems to come so easy, keep writting i'll keep reading, your coming through with that inner beauty . . .

Ben

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