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Array ( [sid] => 101710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will you ever [time] => 2005-07-20 12:06:32 [hometext] => I think i'm lost , leave some comments [bodytext] => Shattered I’ve fallen , broken from the inside out
Holding on to what amounts to nothing,
Giving in to this last breath
I’m falling into your arms, I cant stand anymore
I’m lost in all this misery , and this is all that’s left of me.

I’ve come this far only to lose,
I’ve lost everything , I gave in to u
This is my only hope,
But there’s no light in the dark
Please come hold me forever , because I cant live anymore
I’m going under, and this is all that’s left of me.

I’m stuck in this moment, this memory
Time goes right past me as I miss you being with me
I close my eyes, but I have no more faith
I’m losing control , I’m to blind to see.
I’ve lost myself , but you can find me
I need you with me , but there’s nothing left of me.

I need you to love me.
But I don’t know if you do
And you shouldn’t promise me a broken dream,
If you cant be what I need.
I’ll love you forever ,
But will you ever love me?

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Will you ever

Contributed by strwbrrystrbrst0225 on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Shattered I’ve fallen , broken from the inside out
Holding on to what amounts to nothing,
Giving in to this last breath
I’m falling into your arms, I cant stand anymore
I’m lost in all this misery , and this is all that’s left of me.

I’ve come this far only to lose,
I’ve lost everything , I gave in to u
This is my only hope,
But there’s no light in the dark
Please come hold me forever , because I cant live anymore
I’m going under, and this is all that’s left of me.

I’m stuck in this moment, this memory
Time goes right past me as I miss you being with me
I close my eyes, but I have no more faith
I’m losing control , I’m to blind to see.
I’ve lost myself , but you can find me
I need you with me , but there’s nothing left of me.

I need you to love me.
But I don’t know if you do
And you shouldn’t promise me a broken dream,
If you cant be what I need.
I’ll love you forever ,
But will you ever love me?

Copyright Â© strwbrrystrbrst0225 ... [ 2005-07-20 12:06:32]
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Re: Will you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:13:29 PM AEST
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This poem contains feelings that I can certainly sympathise with. The texture seems a little un-even which I like as it represents the turmoil, you are going through. I think this is a good poem, Thank you for sharing it x

Re: Will you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:08:26 PM AEST
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I feel ya..
your pain is very evident in your write..

Dreams don'y die, only hope does-
so keep hope alive and your dreams will come true.

Much HOPE and happiness to you my friend-

B

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