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Let me see inside
All the secretes you've
Tried so hard to hide
Allow me to enter places untold
Beginning a journey of healing
Layer by layer heart unfolds
Revealing a deeper feeling
Remove the mask,
break down the walls
The beauty within begins shining
Surrender to the whispered calls
Between your heart and mine
Allow our unburdened souls to soar
Two hearts reunited will be divine
Faith, trust and honesty the cure
For all that ails the heart and mind
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Healing

Contributed by LoveStruck_Hippie on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:32:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Open your eyes
Let me see inside
All the secretes you've
Tried so hard to hide
Allow me to enter places untold
Beginning a journey of healing
Layer by layer heart unfolds
Revealing a deeper feeling
Remove the mask,
break down the walls
The beauty within begins shining
Surrender to the whispered calls
Between your heart and mine
Allow our unburdened souls to soar
Two hearts reunited will be divine
Faith, trust and honesty the cure
For all that ails the heart and mind

Copyright © LoveStruck_Hippie ... [ 2005-07-18 01:32:40]
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Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:04:22 AM AEST
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An awesomely beautifull masterpeice of truth.
Very good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by Asthenia on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:33:02 AM AEST
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this was very beautiful, i enjoyed every line...awesome

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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"Surrender to the whispered calls
between your heart and mine
Allow our unburdened souls to soar..."

Nice! I enjoyed this write. Keep it up!

Scorp.

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:59:36 AM AEST
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Open your eyes
Let me see inside

If he opens his eyes ..how does that allow You to see?
just a little question ... you could maybe say ..

open your eyes and look deep inside ..
don't allow yourself to hide .. or something ..

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:04:57 PM AEST
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Hi Shannon. First my (belated) welcome to YPDC (I have been hanging elsewhere mostly ;-) This is a beautiful poem, lots of heartfelt emotion! *hugs* and Welcome to here! Blessings, Julie (or Jules as Naz likes to say).

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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A very healing poem indeed. There is a soft loving quality to this poem. I depict a tone of reverence and hope, a gentle encouraging without any demands.

A beautiful poem, Shannon

Will/Terry

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:03:26 PM AEST
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Kind of ironic that we both did a poem on healing, albeit they're very different focus. This is a beautiful poem with a good rhythum and flow. A wonderful message about letting your guard down so that you may be united in a closer and loving union.

A very pleasant read, well done Shannon

Will/Terry

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 04:04:38 PM AEST
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Shannon, Loved your message here. Beautiful write. I have a sweet hippie deadhead friend named Shannon that lives out in Pennsylvania. You made me think of her. Loved the write. Thanks for sharing, my hippie sister, Laura

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:39:41 PM AEST
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Yet again I have found myself to be envious of you. Loved it

Re: Healing (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:49:41 AM AEST
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wow, beautifully written! loved every line.

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