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Array ( [sid] => 10137 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Wish I Was Invisible [time] => 2003-01-10 12:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote this in september, when I was totally grieving over my ex. (yeah I know, I write about him alot lol). It was an assignment in class....a found poem and I think it turned out pretty good. It's about all these feelings that went through my head and how I felt at the time. [bodytext] => I want to pretend
Like everything's okay
But I'm feeling like
I'm still scared
I open my eyes
And everything's just like yesterday
I don't even try to remember,
I still belong to you,
It's rattling inside me
Like pennies in a tin box
And I'm sitting here
With that look on my face
I wish I was invisible
All of a sudden...
I'm feeling sick inside
And I'm crying
In front of everybody
Even if I pretend
Like everything's ok...
It's too late.
I want to be far away already,
I wish I was invisible.
I dont know why:
You may be the one...
But your still the one that hurts me.
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I Wish I Was Invisible

Contributed by flirtyrockstar on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I want to pretend
Like everything's okay
But I'm feeling like
I'm still scared
I open my eyes
And everything's just like yesterday
I don't even try to remember,
I still belong to you,
It's rattling inside me
Like pennies in a tin box
And I'm sitting here
With that look on my face
I wish I was invisible
All of a sudden...
I'm feeling sick inside
And I'm crying
In front of everybody
Even if I pretend
Like everything's ok...
It's too late.
I want to be far away already,
I wish I was invisible.
I dont know why:
You may be the one...
But your still the one that hurts me.

Copyright © flirtyrockstar ... [ 2003-01-10 12:20:00]
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Re: I Wish I Was Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 04:56:24 PM AEST
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I want to be far away already,
I wish I was invisible.

I like those two lines they say a lot. I'm sure we've all felt like you've described. Its takes a while to get over someone you've loved or thought you've loved, but ya gotta keep yer chin up. Nice poem

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I Wish I Was Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 04:58:23 PM AEST
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this is an amazing poem...well done...wow...

Re: I Wish I Was Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by fancyface4898 on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 12:38:25 AM AEST
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nicely put. I hope you got a high grade

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