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and it all i need to get high on life and love who needs drugs
i got my family, i got my rep, i got my hope and dreams
i don't need anything eles to stop me from smokeing that pot
a drug addict i'm not. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 66 [informant] => russ-dawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

one puff, two puff

Contributed by russ-dawg on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 08:39:31 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

i laugh and i cry and i joke
and it all i need to get high on life and love who needs drugs
i got my family, i got my rep, i got my hope and dreams
i don't need anything eles to stop me from smokeing that pot
a drug addict i'm not.

Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-07-14 20:39:31]
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Re: one puff, two puff (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 11:07:00 PM AEST
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im glad you recognized what you had. -just a suggestion..maybe if you put a little more feeling and description into it we can see where you are coming from rather than where you are going, your writing is still inspirational and can open eyes, its just a thought, good write! =)

Re: one puff, two puff (User Rating: 1 )
by Freak-of-the-Week on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:03:47 AM AEST
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Why do I have the feeling that this was somehow half-way inspired by what I told you about Gerard? (o_0)

Re: one puff, two puff (User Rating: 1 )
by shep on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:14:47 PM AEST
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thankyou. kind of helped me look at my use of marijuana which i didnt really see as an addiction or abuse.

Re: one puff, two puff (User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:48:55 PM AEST
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one thing that i see as a poet is the title of a poem... if it is not grasping in any sense then the poem is a waste... no matter how good the stanzas... the title of this poem drew me to it because i have been thru many things in my life... many addictions... pot being one... thank god no longer am i a slave to these distractions... but i must say that the title was... to me... invititing....? for sake of words... and the poem that followed was... amazing... the last line really caught me and im glad to hear that you can stand for that... congradulations on the amazing write

jeremy

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