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Array ( [sid] => 100954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ******* Through [time] => 2005-07-12 11:18:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
Because none of them are ******* true.
I'm sick of the lies you promise me,
The little games you play one me.
I won't handle this any longer,
I didn't want to hate you,
I wanted to stay your friend.
But I can't stand it, you're a liar.
This has got to be the way it ends.
So stay the **** away from me,
If you are going to play more games.
I'm going to be as tough as steel now,
I won't love so easily.
I won't long to feel your touch.
I'm moving on now,
Taking a stand.
You have said it once before:
I deserve a better man.
So I will take your advice,
I'm leaving you for good.
Don't come crawling back to me,
I've grown out of childhood.
I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
None of them were ******* true.
No more promises will I make to you,
So that's it John, we're ******* through. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 6 [informant] => xXcrossedXx [notes] => Edited for Rated R Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

******* Through

Contributed by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
Because none of them are ******* true.
I'm sick of the lies you promise me,
The little games you play one me.
I won't handle this any longer,
I didn't want to hate you,
I wanted to stay your friend.
But I can't stand it, you're a liar.
This has got to be the way it ends.
So stay the **** away from me,
If you are going to play more games.
I'm going to be as tough as steel now,
I won't love so easily.
I won't long to feel your touch.
I'm moving on now,
Taking a stand.
You have said it once before:
I deserve a better man.
So I will take your advice,
I'm leaving you for good.
Don't come crawling back to me,
I've grown out of childhood.
I'm sick of the feelings I have for you,
None of them were ******* true.
No more promises will I make to you,
So that's it John, we're ******* through.

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Re: ******* Through (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:13:38 PM AEST
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Excellent break-up poem! Very well put. Nice flow and rhyme. I hope this helps you to vent some of your anger and to move on. Peace.
Thumper ; o)

Re: ******* Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 12:20:38 AM AEST
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very potent. =] i like angry poems. i felt your anger, and i loved the phrase "f*cking true" and "f*cking through" but dont tell anyone =] on one spot i think you can change the lines to not have me so close together and at the end of each of those lines. your ending was of course wonderful, very impressing.

Re: ******* Through (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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I EFFING LOVED IT! wow amanda! you did great on this one! can i use it when i break up with anyone i hate lol very nive rythm and rhyme i loved it my favorite stanza is "i'm sick of the feelings i have for you, none of them were f****** true" i loved it... LOVED IT!!! lol keep up the good work amanda

luv ur cuz
~karis~

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