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Array ( [sid] => 100721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Love Her Once [time] => 2005-07-10 02:21:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This woman kind with loving eyes
To love her once before she dies,
To love her once, once without cries
Will surely lead to my demise…

A gentle kiss, a soft caress,
This lady sweet who I love best
Again my love put to the test
Soon in peace I know she’ll rest…

While embraced, I draw my blade
I thrust it in – though God forbade
And now gone – the love we made
Finally, I’ve ended this charade…

And as she lay upon her crimson sheet
Which grows in size with each heartbeat
My feeling of sorrow begins to fleet,
Though almost gone I hear her bleat…

Now I kneel to kiss her again,
Her lifeless eyes soon begin
To fade to white as I gaze within
And try to justify this sin…
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To Love Her Once

Contributed by masked_man on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 02:21:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This woman kind with loving eyes
To love her once before she dies,
To love her once, once without cries
Will surely lead to my demise…

A gentle kiss, a soft caress,
This lady sweet who I love best
Again my love put to the test
Soon in peace I know she’ll rest…

While embraced, I draw my blade
I thrust it in – though God forbade
And now gone – the love we made
Finally, I’ve ended this charade…

And as she lay upon her crimson sheet
Which grows in size with each heartbeat
My feeling of sorrow begins to fleet,
Though almost gone I hear her bleat…

Now I kneel to kiss her again,
Her lifeless eyes soon begin
To fade to white as I gaze within
And try to justify this sin…

Copyright © masked_man ... [ 2005-07-10 02:21:50]
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Re: To Love Her Once (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:52:49 AM AEST
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wow..the first two stanzaz start out nice...then you go on a murderous rage...interesting..

wizard

Re: To Love Her Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:04:36 AM AEST
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watches curiously...in awe.
*loves it*
This is one of the best pieces I have seen in a while...
wow.
*breath stolen away*
I adore the steady beat of this piece...as though it had been composed to have simulated the beating of her heart.

Re: To Love Her Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:14:39 PM AEST
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I love this write!!! It is erotic, captivating , and well written.

Leia36

Re: To Love Her Once (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:41:41 PM AEST
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no way to justify that sin masked man..lol

great write though..
great flow.

B

Re: To Love Her Once (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:56:46 PM AEST
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wow that poem took my breath away, it was so well written, I shall be looking out for more from you

pix xx

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