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Array ( [sid] => 10059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Death at 14 [time] => 2003-01-09 12:00:00 [hometext] => The end is an inside joke between my best friend and I so you won't understand it. If you'd like to copy this poem, just leave off the last two stanzas and it should work well. [bodytext] => Cut and Pain
Tears begin to fall.
Suicide note,
Written on the wall.

Fear and Sadness,
Screams that no one hears.
Thoughts of death,
At 14 years.

Cutting, Slicing,
Blood begins to pour.
I’m such a *****,
A little whore.

Truth reveled,
Pills down my throat.
My last few words,
A suicide note.

Teenager gone,
Friends begin to see,
An empty desk,
Where I should be.

I lie on the floor,
Hoping someone would walk in.
Seeing me there, on the floor,
Blood coming from within.

I was 14 years old,
When my last tears, I cried.
But the truth is,
I never wanted suicide.

But my last words written,
Were to my bestest friend.
The most important person,
Had to watch my life end.

I wanted to be saved,
In my blood I swam,
But I left with a laugh…
“Just Admiring You Banana Bread Ma’am”
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Death at 14

Contributed by Lost4EvEr1541 on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Cut and Pain
Tears begin to fall.
Suicide note,
Written on the wall.

Fear and Sadness,
Screams that no one hears.
Thoughts of death,
At 14 years.

Cutting, Slicing,
Blood begins to pour.
I’m such a *****,
A little whore.

Truth reveled,
Pills down my throat.
My last few words,
A suicide note.

Teenager gone,
Friends begin to see,
An empty desk,
Where I should be.

I lie on the floor,
Hoping someone would walk in.
Seeing me there, on the floor,
Blood coming from within.

I was 14 years old,
When my last tears, I cried.
But the truth is,
I never wanted suicide.

But my last words written,
Were to my bestest friend.
The most important person,
Had to watch my life end.

I wanted to be saved,
In my blood I swam,
But I left with a laugh…
“Just Admiring You Banana Bread Ma’am”

Copyright Â© Lost4EvEr1541 ... [ 2003-01-09 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:20:19 PM AEST
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Absolutely loved this poem! Great write!

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:31:56 PM AEST
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Wow this was a great write,so very sad on suicide but very well written here! Christina

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:09:25 PM AEST
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I hope you really don't feel that way, life is a wonderful thing we all are given, you are given a special assignment when you arrive here, and until its finished please stay with us, take care,

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by idiotbox on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:54:16 PM AEST
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this is a great poem! you really make the reader see and feel great write!

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:49:09 PM AEST
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You have a great talent, hope someday you'll write about things not quiet soo dark.
Jeff

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by DeLeriousTearZ on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 10:10:03 PM AEST
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this is such a great poem. I totally feel it! Keep writing!!!!

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:36:13 PM AEST
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I don't get the last line. But I think this was well put together. You have a talent. But remember. Your in for hell..but you will overcome it. Life only has to get better.

Re: Death at 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 08:55:04 PM AEST
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good poem

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