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Array ( [sid] => 10026 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => At First Sight [time] => 2003-01-09 01:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for my husband before we got married [bodytext] => At first sight I loved you
at first sight you smiled
and the time that we spent
was worth all the while

I stared so intently
at your precious lips
they are welcome to kiss
all my fingertips

Your eyes are amazing
your heart just the same
I get weak when you speak
or just say my name

I madly want to be
the girl of your dreams
I feel very happy
more so than it seems

My heart is on fire
each time you are near
I hope you believe that
these words are sincere

I can't read your thoughts yet
even if I try
sad tears fill up my eyes
when you say goodbye

Please trust me when I say
I'll devote my time
to keeping you happy
and making you mine

Now I must tell you, dear
how much I love you
and I hope that you feel
the same as I do

I loving is living
I'm living for you
If living is loving
my loving is true

If there is such a thing
as love at first sight
then it happened to me
on that very first night

August 20, 1999 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jenblack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
At First Sight

Contributed by jenblack on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



At first sight I loved you
at first sight you smiled
and the time that we spent
was worth all the while

I stared so intently
at your precious lips
they are welcome to kiss
all my fingertips

Your eyes are amazing
your heart just the same
I get weak when you speak
or just say my name

I madly want to be
the girl of your dreams
I feel very happy
more so than it seems

My heart is on fire
each time you are near
I hope you believe that
these words are sincere

I can't read your thoughts yet
even if I try
sad tears fill up my eyes
when you say goodbye

Please trust me when I say
I'll devote my time
to keeping you happy
and making you mine

Now I must tell you, dear
how much I love you
and I hope that you feel
the same as I do

I loving is living
I'm living for you
If living is loving
my loving is true

If there is such a thing
as love at first sight
then it happened to me
on that very first night

August 20, 1999




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Re: At First Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:10:05 AM AEST
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Dearest Jenblack @-<<-
A True Rose of a Poem You have here!!
Really Beautiful!!
Your friend:)
Always Nessa


Re: At First Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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beautiful.
Your husband is very blessed to have a wife like you.


Re: At First Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:28:45 AM AEST
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ah wow this is gorgeous and the sincerity just shines throught in it


Re: At First Sight (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:29:01 AM AEST
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Your mr. is a lucky man. since your dreams realized both you are wonderful couple. hi..lady, congrats. Thanks for sharing your sweetest love poem.. venkat




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