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[aid] => Mick
[title] => What I Must Have Felt ?
[time] => 2003-01-08 20:00:00
[hometext] => when i was really said and done with lots of things and heartbreaks, this is the poem which flowed from my heart .
[bodytext] => There is pain , lots and lots of pain ,
Did I venture out seeking pain , No , I didn’t , I was just looking out for some emotional gains . Day in day out I made friends . But did I ever give it a thought how my world would become when my friends leave . No, never . I guess I was wrong there , I should have given it a thought , a deep thought . My friends were my world , I loved my world . As all good things come to an end , so did this . One fine day they just left , Without an explaination , Don’t I deserve an explaination They couldn’t have left just like that , But they did leave just like that . why did they do this to me ? I don’t know , I don’t have an explaination . My world came crashing down for once . I faced it , I felt it , But can you stand in my place and just for a second feel what I must have felt ? I admit I fell in love a lot of times , everytime I thought it was so very real , so very genuine , so very truthful . But after everything when the girls showed me their thumb or who just left like my friends without an explaination . I would feel betrayed , But betrayed by whom the girl or myself who was foolish enough to presume that the girl loved me . No one again wanted to give an explaination or make me understand , why ? Again my world came crashing down . I faced it , I felt it , But can you stand in my place and just for a second feel what I must have felt ? How does it feel when the one whom you love and vice-versa leaves without a notice , Bad , definitely bad , Father I am talking about you , Atleast you could have given me a notice . I guess time didn’t permit you to do that . With friends and girls its ok , but you too !!! You were the one I loved thee most , I myself didn’t realize it then . Over a span of time I have realized how much you loved me . But I can’t reciprocate it back to you , Can I !!! I feel you are a bit too far and yet so very close in my memory where you will never cease to exist . This time around my world didn’t come crashing down , It was I who crashed downed . I faced it , I felt it , But can you stand in my place and just for a second feel what I must have felt ? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bhav [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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