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Array ( [sid] => 100068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who are you [time] => 2005-07-04 09:53:35 [hometext] => I am a new poet on here. Hope to meet you soon. [bodytext] => Who are you as I pass in my car,
I look at you and never seen you before,
I look into your face,
As I am driving to a place,
I wonder about you.
Are you doing ok.
What kind of life have you lived,
Are you happy, or sad.
Do you want to die or live,
A moment in time.
We pass eachother,
A moment in time to say hi to one another,
A special meeting
That again will never take place.
I just met you,
By looking at your face.
You speed by,
Others behind,
I look into their face.
And then I wonder why.
Why this particular time,
In this big wide world.
Do we get to meet,but yet we don't.
I look over at you,
You look at me,
Just a faint moment in time. only,
But it is a reality.
Who are you ?
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Who are you

Contributed by texaspoet2005 on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:53:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Who are you as I pass in my car,
I look at you and never seen you before,
I look into your face,
As I am driving to a place,
I wonder about you.
Are you doing ok.
What kind of life have you lived,
Are you happy, or sad.
Do you want to die or live,
A moment in time.
We pass eachother,
A moment in time to say hi to one another,
A special meeting
That again will never take place.
I just met you,
By looking at your face.
You speed by,
Others behind,
I look into their face.
And then I wonder why.
Why this particular time,
In this big wide world.
Do we get to meet,but yet we don't.
I look over at you,
You look at me,
Just a faint moment in time. only,
But it is a reality.
Who are you ?

Copyright © texaspoet2005 ... [ 2005-07-04 09:53:35]
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Re: Who are you (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:30:49 AM AEST
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This poem is so very what happens in real life...Have you ever had an eye to eye relationship with a complete stranger?
It's really weird and if no one cuts the gaze, it can last for as long as 5 mins. Weird right?
anyways, I'm looking forward to more of your poems.
-Glass

Re: Who are you (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:07:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, texaspoet2005!

Your first post says a lot about you, I believe --- you're obviously a 'thinker'. And I'd agree... it is a shame that we come so close and still are so distant from the many that we pass by everyday.

Keep writing!
~Snemmy~

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